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hya0906

April 29, 2021

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I like reading English books and English sentences. because It make me focus on it and make me fun. speaking one language is boring. I think I always make mistakes in sentences. and I am so embrrassed when I write wrong sentences with texts. I made so many mistakes while I were talking to someone. I wish I was good at speaking English. I know making mistake is okay. but I feel shame when I talk to someone I like. But I think if I were English speaker, I couldn't be good at speaking Korean because It is difficult to me even though I am korean. Today my brother didn't study math. why would he not study math??? he always makes long face when he does math. lol

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I like reading English books and English sentences.

because Iit makes me focus on it and make me funlearning and it is fun for me.

sSpeaking one language is boring.

I think I always make mistakes in sentences.

and I am so embarrassed when I write wrongmake mistakes in sentences within texts.

I made so many mistakes while I wereas talking to someone.

I wish I was good at speaking English.

I know making mistakes is okay.,

but I feel ashamed/embarrassed when I talk to someone I like.

But I think if I were English speaker, I cwouldn't be good at speaking Korean because Iit is difficult to me even though I am kKorean.

Today my brother didn't study math.

wWhy would he not study math???

Using multiple question marks (???) is okay here as this is a casual text, but you shouldn't use this in formal writing.

hHe always makes a long face when he does math.

This might be regional, but I find "makes a long face" unusual. I'd probably say "He always looks sad when he does math."

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hya0906

April 30, 2021

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thank you!

I know making mistake is okay.


I know making mistakes is okay.,

but I feel shame when I talk to someone I like.


but I feel ashamed/embarrassed when I talk to someone I like.

I wish I was good at speaking English.


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But I think if I were English speaker, I couldn't be good at speaking Korean because It is difficult to me even though I am korean.


But I think if I were English speaker, I cwouldn't be good at speaking Korean because Iit is difficult to me even though I am kKorean.

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I like reading English books and English sentences.


I like reading English books and English sentences.

because It make me focus on it and make me fun.


because Iit makes me focus on it and make me funlearning and it is fun for me.

speaking one language is boring.


sSpeaking one language is boring.

I think I always make mistakes in sentences.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

and I am so embrrassed when I write wrong sentences with texts.


and I am so embarrassed when I write wrongmake mistakes in sentences within texts.

I made so many mistakes while I were talking to someone.


I made so many mistakes while I wereas talking to someone.

Today my brother didn't study math.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

why would he not study math???


wWhy would he not study math???

Using multiple question marks (???) is okay here as this is a casual text, but you shouldn't use this in formal writing.

he always makes long face when he does math.


hHe always makes a long face when he does math.

This might be regional, but I find "makes a long face" unusual. I'd probably say "He always looks sad when he does math."

lol


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