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I ate a strawberries Sandwich as my desert in dinner tonigh.
My dad and siblings went out, and they bought strawberries sandwiches as a souvenir for my mom and me.
They are outdoor people, and my dad and my little brother played soccer for two hours right after they got home.
I want the energy that much.
I'm too lazy to prepare to go out and I tend to choose staying at home.
However, I'm in the summer holidays right now, so I think I should go outside weekends.

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They are outdoor people, and my dad and my little brother played soccer for two hours right after they got home.

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I ate a strawberries Sandwich as my desert in dinner tonigh.


I ate a strawberries Sy sandwich as my dessert inafter dinner tonight. I ate a strawberry sandwich as my dessert after dinner tonight.

It is not clear whether you ate the sandwich for dinner (in place of dessert) or skipped dinner to eat it as dessert instead.

I ate a strawberries Sy sandwich as myfor dessert inafter dinner tonight. I ate a strawberry sandwich for dessert after dinner tonight.

The subject is a singular (1) sandwich with may strawberries in it - the flavour of the sandwich. Dessert (2 s's) = sweet. Desert (1 s) = dry arid land. The subject is "I", so you don't need to say "as my desert", you can simply write the meal it was for. Usually, we eat desert after dinner.

I ate a strawberries Sy sandwich as my dessert inat dinner tonight. I ate a strawberry sandwich as my dessert at dinner tonight.

I ate a strawberries Sy sandwich as my dessert inat dinner tonight. I ate a strawberry sandwich as my dessert at dinner tonight.

"desert" = Sandy, dry region "dessert" = sweet food eaten in addition to a meal When ingredients are used as an adjective for a meal, they're _usually_ singular, but some specific dish names might use plural.

My dad and siblings went out, and they bought strawberries sandwiches as a souvenir for my mom and me.


My dad and siblings went out, and they bought strawberriesy sandwiches as a souvenirgifts for my mom and me. My dad and siblings went out and bought strawberry sandwiches as gifts for my mom and me.

My dad and siblings went out, and they bought strawberriesy sandwiches as a souvenirtreat for my mom and meI. My dad and siblings went out and bought strawberry sandwiches as a treat for my mom and I.

As a collocation, we say "a treat" when referring to dessert. You could also say "My dad and siblings went out together and bought strawberry sandwiches as a treat" or "they bought strawberry sandwiches as a gift/surprise" if you did not know you were going to receive them. For proper grammar, we use "_____ and I". Shorter options: "My dad and siblings bought strawberry sandwiches for my mom and I." "When my dad and siblings went out, they bought strawberry sandwiches for my mom and I."

My dad and siblings went out, and they bought strawberriesy sandwiches as a souvenirgift for my mom and me. My dad and siblings went out and they bought strawberry sandwiches as a gift for my mom and me.

My dad and siblings went out, and they bought strawberriesy sandwiches as a souvenir for my mom and me. My dad and siblings went out, and they bought strawberry sandwiches as a souvenir for my mom and me.

They are outdoor people, and my dad and my little brother played soccer for two hours right after they got home.


TMy dad and little brotheyr are outdoorsy people, and my dad and my little brother played soccer for two hours right after they got home. My dad and little brother are outdoorsy people and played soccer for two hours right after they got home.

They are outdoorsy people, and my dad and my little brother played soccer for two hours right after they got home. They are outdoorsy people, and my dad and my little brother played soccer for two hours right after they got home.

"outdoorsy" is an adjective to describe people who enjoy being outdoors.

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They are outdoor people, and my dad and my little brother played soccer for two hours right after they got home. They are outdoor people, and my dad and little brother for two hours right after they got home.

You don't need to repeat "my" here

I want the energy that much.


I want their same energy that much. I want their same energy.

You could also say "I wish I had that same energy"

I want the energy that much energy. I want that much energy.

"I want (to have) that much energy." You are trying to shorten saying that you want to have as much energy as they do.

I want the energy that much energy. I want that much energy.

I want the energyo have that much energy. I want to have that much energy.

"I want X that much" would be saying how much you want X, but you'd also need to pair it up with an actual example of how much you want it. If you want to say you want the same amount of energy as your dad and brother, it's better to use "that much" as a modifier to "energy"

I'm too lazy to prepare to go out and I tend to choose staying at home.


I'm too lazy to prepare to go out and I tend to choose staying at home. I'm too lazy to go out and tend to choose staying at home.

When two clauses in a sentence have the same subject, you don't have to repeat it. You could also say "...and prefer to stay at home".

I'm too lazy to prepareget ready to go out and, so I tend to choose staying at home. I'm too lazy to get ready to go out, so I tend to choose staying at home.

Prepare is a good word, but "get ready (to do something)" is a more natural collocation. We prepare for larger trips, for example, a vacation. "so," instead of "and" as a conjunction because you follow up will a reason or justification (a result) "I tend to choose staying at home". You can also say " I tend to stay at home" or "I tend to choose to stay (at) home."

I'm too lazy to prepare to go out and I tend to choose to staying at home. I'm too lazy to prepare to go out and I tend to choose to stay at home.

However, I'm in the summer holidays right now, so I think I should go outside weekends.


However, I'm in theon summer holidays right now, so I think I should go outside on the weekends. However, I'm on summer holiday right now, so I think I should go outside on the weekends.

"I'm on summer holiday" for British English. "I'm on summer break (or summer vacation)" for American English.

However, I'm in theon summer holidays right now, so I think I should go outside on weekends. However, I'm on summer holidays right now, so I think I should go outside on weekends.

"summer holidays" is good, but more British English - most North American English will use "summer vacation". If you are a student, you can use "summer break". "on weekends" or "during (the) weekends" - you need a preposition to be doing something within a fixed period of time.

However, I'm in the summer holidays right now, so I think I should go outside weekends. However, I'm in the summer holidays right now, so I think I should go outside weekends.

In the USA we would say "I'm on summer vacation" or "I'm on summer break." I think your response may be correct in England, but I could be wrong.

However, I'm ion themy summer holidays right now, so I think I should go outside on weekends. However, I'm on my summer holidays right now, so I think I should go outside on weekends.

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