May 15, 2026
The Flowers in Early Summer
The weather has been quite good recently in Shanghai.
As a result, my balcony garden is fresh and almost has new blooms every day, which I really wanted to share with you guys.
I filmed a new variety of morning glory last night, you can see it here: https://youtube.com/shorts/c4W0lFCKNdE
You might remember that I also have a variety of roses with the same type of gold-sprinkled pattern. Yes, I really love this kind of artistic flowers
When I narrated the video, I was a little tired and noticed that my pauses while speaking English were quite weird, but I don't know why or how to improve.
Could you tell me your thoughts?
Thanks in advance!
P.S.这是写给帮我改进英文的笔友们的谢礼，不用参照它改英文。
初夏的花儿们
最近上海天气不错。
因而，我的阳台花园日新月异，几乎每天都有新的花儿绽放——真的很想和你们分享这些美好。
昨晚我拍摄了一个新品种的牵牛花，这里可以看：
可还记得，我有一棵玫瑰，也是类似的洒金纹。是的，我真的好喜欢这类带有艺术感的花。
给这段视频做旁白时，我有点累，发现自己在说英语时的断句方式有些奇怪。但我不知道这是怎么回事，也不知道该如何改进。
能跟我讲讲你的看法吗？
谢了先！
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The Flowers in Early Summer
The weather has been quite good recently in Shanghai.
As a result, my balcony garden is fresh and almost has new blooms every day, which I really wanted to share with you guys.
I filmed a new variety of morning glory last night, you can see it here: https://youtube.com/shorts/c4W0lFCKNdE
You might also remember that I also have a variety of roses with the same type of gold-sprinkled pattern. You might also remember that I also have a variety of roses with the same type of gold-sprinkled pattern.
Yes, I really love this kind of artistic flowers
I really love this kind of artistic flowers
The yes there is unnecessary
When I narrated the video, I was a little tired and noticed that my pauses while speaking English were quite weird, but I don't know why or how to improve. When I narrated the video, I was a little tired and noticed that my pauses while speaking English were quite weird, but I don't know why or how to improve.
I noticed the way you spoke is similar to another Chinese creator I follow. I also noticed a lot of ahhs.
Maybe you should shadow more English videos to speak more naturally.
Could you tell me your thoughts?
Thanks in advance!
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The Flowers in Early Summer
The weather has been quite good recently in Shanghai.
As a result, my balcony garden is fresh and almost has new blooms almost every day, which I really wanted to share with you guys.
As a result, my balcony garden is fresh and has new blooms almost every day, which I really wanted to share with you guys.
I filmed a new variety of morning glory last night,; you can see it here: https://youtube.com/shorts/c4W0lFCKNdE
I filmed a new variety of morning glory last night; you can see it here: https://youtube.com/shorts/c4W0lFCKNdE
Yes, I really love this kind offlowers with artistic flowerspatterns.
Yes, I really love flowers with artistic patterns.
Describing flowers themselves as artistic sounds a bit strange, but a pattern can be artistic.
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As a result, my balcony garden is fresh and almost has new blooms every day, which I really wanted to share with you guys.
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I filmed a new variety of morning glory last night, you can see it here: https://youtube.com/shorts/c4W0lFCKNdE
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You might remember that I also have a variety of roses with the same type of gold-sprinkled pattern. You might also remember that I also have a variety of roses with the same type of gold-sprinkled pattern. You might also remember that I also have a variety of roses with the same type of gold-sprinkled pattern. |
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Yes, I really love this kind of artistic flowers
Yes, I really love Describing flowers themselves as artistic sounds a bit strange, but a pattern can be artistic.
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When I narrated the video, I was a little tired and noticed that my pauses while speaking English were quite weird, but I don't know why or how to improve. When I narrated the video, I was a little tired and noticed that my pauses while speaking English were quite weird, but I don't know why or how to improve. When I narrated the video, I was a little tired and noticed that my pauses while speaking English were quite weird, but I don't know why or how to improve. I noticed the way you spoke is similar to another Chinese creator I follow. I also noticed a lot of ahhs. Maybe you should shadow more English videos to speak more naturally. |
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