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March 25, 2021

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100th Post on LangCorrect

Today, I'm really excited to have my 100th post on LangCorrect in only less than a year, and grateful for all those who have been involved in correcting my work. They have provided detailed correction for all of my ninety-nine writings I have posted so far. Even though I still have failed to add "a" or "the" and mistaken on simple grammars like tenses and plural forms, I feel that my vocabulary and writing skills have improved, and I use the dictionary less frequently than before. If you make sentences by yourself without hesitation and have native speakers correct your articles, you can realize your lack of knowledge and your bad habits.
As many users do, I have managed to pick up a wide variety of topics not to make readers feel bored. As a result, I could learn a variety of expression on several fields. I admire some users who have published more than 100 posts for their efforts since it is difficult to find attractive topics. Nonetheless, I'm going to join 30 Day Language Challenge which is supposed to start from April 1st. I was surprised to see the participant list because it seems that Japanese is most popular language in LangCorrect community. I will keep helping Japanese learners and learning English as well.


わずか1年も経たぬうちに100回目の投稿を迎えることができて大変嬉しいです。添削に関わってくれた方々に感謝します。これまでに投稿した99本の記事全てを詳細に添削してもらいました。未だに冠詞の付け忘れや時制のミスが目立つ内容ですが、次第に辞書を引く頻度も減り語彙力も向上したように思います。ミスを恐れずまずは自分の頭で考えて文章を練り上げることで、知識の欠損や自分の悪い癖に気づくことができます。
ありきたりな文章ばかりでは添削する方も飽きてしまうでしょうし、何より分野が偏らないようにすることで様々な表現を学べると考え、多くのユーザーと同様に様々なトピックに触れてきました。話題探しには大変苦慮したので、100件を超える投稿をしているユーザーを心から尊敬しています。4月から始まる30日投稿チャレンジにも余裕があれば参加してみようと思っています。参加者を見ると日本語を学習しているユーザーの割合が多いようで驚きました。英語の学習とともに、引き続き日本語の添削にも協力していくつもりです。

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Today, I'm really excited to have my 100th post on LangCorrect in only less than a year, and. I’m grateful for all those who have been involved in correcting my work.

‘I’m grateful for all those’ is correct but quite formal. ‘I’m grateful for everyone’ might be better.

They have provided detailed corrections for all of my ninety-nine writings I have posteds so far.

Even though I still have failedsometimes forget to add "a"‘a’ or "the" and make mistaken ons with simple grammars like tenses and plural forms, I feel that my vocabulary and writing skills have improved, and I use the dictionary less frequently than before.

“” are ‘speech marks’ you only use them for something which someone actually spoke out loud in English.

If you make sentences by yourself without hesitation and have native speakers correct your articles, you can realize your lack of knowledge and your bad habits.

Articles is a little awkward here, article would refer to something in a magazine or newspaper (something a professional wrote).

As many users do, I have managed to pick upcovered a wide variety of topics not to makeso readers don’t feel bored.

A minor point but it’s not natural to say ‘I managed’ in this case, since your objective (not making readers feel bored) can only truly be confirmed by those readers. Saying it yourself seems a little over-confident.

As a result, I could’ve learnt a variety of expression on several fields to discuss diverse topics.

I admire some users who have published more than 100 posts for their efforts since it is difficult to find attractive topics.

Nonetheless, I'm going to join the 30 Day Language Challenge which is supposed to start fromon April 1st.

I was surprised to see the participant list because it seems that Japanese is most popular language in the LangCorrect community.

I will keep helping Japanese learners and learning English as well.

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Nice work! I’m joining the 30 day challenge myself but practising Korean 😃

100th Post on LangCorrect


Today, I'm really excited to have my 100th post on LangCorrect in only less than a year, and grateful for all those who have been involved in correcting my work.


Today, I'm really excited to have my 100th post on LangCorrect in only less than a year, and. I’m grateful for all those who have been involved in correcting my work.

‘I’m grateful for all those’ is correct but quite formal. ‘I’m grateful for everyone’ might be better.

They have provided detailed correction for all of my ninety-nine writings I have posted so far.


They have provided detailed corrections for all of my ninety-nine writings I have posteds so far.

Even though I still have failed to add "a" or "the" and mistaken on simple grammars like tenses and plural forms, I feel that my vocabulary and writing skills have improved, and I use the dictionary less frequently than before.


Even though I still have failedsometimes forget to add "a"‘a’ or "the" and make mistaken ons with simple grammars like tenses and plural forms, I feel that my vocabulary and writing skills have improved, and I use the dictionary less frequently than before.

“” are ‘speech marks’ you only use them for something which someone actually spoke out loud in English.

If you make sentences by yourself without hesitation and have native speakers correct your articles, you can realize your lack of knowledge and your bad habits.


If you make sentences by yourself without hesitation and have native speakers correct your articles, you can realize your lack of knowledge and your bad habits.

Articles is a little awkward here, article would refer to something in a magazine or newspaper (something a professional wrote).

As many users do, I have managed to pick up a wide variety of topics not to make readers feel bored.


As many users do, I have managed to pick upcovered a wide variety of topics not to makeso readers don’t feel bored.

A minor point but it’s not natural to say ‘I managed’ in this case, since your objective (not making readers feel bored) can only truly be confirmed by those readers. Saying it yourself seems a little over-confident.

As a result, I could learn a variety of expression on several fields.


As a result, I could’ve learnt a variety of expression on several fields to discuss diverse topics.

I admire some users who have published more than 100 posts for their efforts since it is difficult to find attractive topics.


I admire some users who have published more than 100 posts for their efforts since it is difficult to find attractive topics.

Nonetheless, I'm going to join 30 Day Language Challenge which is supposed to start from April 1st.


Nonetheless, I'm going to join the 30 Day Language Challenge which is supposed to start fromon April 1st.

I was surprised to see the participant list because it seems that Japanese is most popular language in LangCorrect community.


I was surprised to see the participant list because it seems that Japanese is most popular language in the LangCorrect community.

I will keep helping Japanese learners and learning English as well.


I will keep helping Japanese learners and learning English as well.

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