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Change me to I, adjust some words. Not sure what you mean by 'how are you doing dark'

Today I discorvedred that my fridge broke, I don't know what happened to it.

change to 'that', change the spelling of 'discovered'

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Add comma. Morn into morning, maybe you meant 'in the morning'

Now I'm at my job and latter I go to home, it's my day

remove 'to' in 'later I go to home', as it's unnecessary. You need to say that you are going to your job. "I am going to my job' vs. "I am going to his job" English needs this clarification

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"She and I" isn't necessary.

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"fridge broke" is ok, but it is more idiomatic to say "my fridge was broken."

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"Discovered" is a transitive verb and has to have an object. You could say "found it like that" as well.

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