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chxh1335

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01.Tarot

Yesterday I played and don't studied language well.
Actually I have a hobby.
That is Tarot fortune.
In fact, I want to know about astrology.
At first, sometimes I read tarot fortune did as hobby.
But I don't have much time to focus on this hobby everyday because of job searching.
Today I will focus on language studying again.
Does your country mean a lot to tarot?
Or are there many people to read tarot fortune?


어제(4월 28일) 노느라 공부를 잘 하지 않았습니다.
사실 저는 취미가 하나 있습니다.
그것은 타로로 점을 치는 것입니다.
사실 점성술을 좀 더 알아보고 싶은데,
일단 취미로서 해왔던 타로를 가끔 해볼까 합니다.
다만 취업 준비로 인해 매일 이 취미에 집중할 시간은 없습니다.
오늘은 다시 언어 공부에 집중할 것입니다.
당신의 나라에서는 타로에 큰 의미를 둡니까?
혹은 타로로 점을 봐주는 사람들이 많습니까?

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01.Tarot

Yesterday I played and doidn't studiedy language well.

Actually, I have a hobby.

ThaIt is Tarot fortune.

In fact, I want to know about astrology.

At first, sometimes I read tarot fortune didI did tarot readings as a hobby sometimes.

But I don't have much time to focus on this hobby everyday because of job searching.

Today, I will focus on language studyingstudying language again.

Does your countrytarot reading mean a lot to tarotyour country?

Not sure if this is what you were trying to say

Or are there many people to readhat do tarot fortunereading?

Feedback

I don't know much about tarot cards so I'm not sure if my corrections were as accurate as they could be for them, but I'd like to get into it someday
Good work!

01.Tarot

Yesterday I played [?], and doidn't studiedy language wellmuch.

It feels like there should be an activity where the [?] is. Otherwise, you could say something like "Yesterday I just played around", if you want to be general.

When speaking in past tense like this, in a chain of multiple verbs, the FIRST verb should be past tense, not the last one. "I didn't study", "She couldn't go", "You wouldn't leave", etc.

AI actually I have a hobby.

We aren't directly contradicting the last sentence, so I would personally move the "actually" a little further into the sentence.

ThaIt is Tarot fortune.

In fact, I want to know aboutlearn astrology.

At first, I sometimes I read tarot fortune didas as hobby.

Note that "read" in this sentence should be past tense.

"Read" is an irregular verb in a very strange way: both its present tense "read" and its past tense "read" are spelled the same, but they are pronounced differently (like "reed" and "red", respectively).

But I don't have much time to focus on this hobby everynowadays because of job searching.

Today I will focus on language studying again.

Does your country mean a lot to tarot?

This sentence is grammatically correct, but I'm not sure what it means. Looking at the sentence after it, maybe you mean something like: "Is your country known for tarot?"

"mean a lot to" is something we almost only use for people, when something or someone has a lot of emotional value for a person. For example: "This watch means a lot to me. My grandfather gave it to me when I was just eight years old."

Or are there many people twho read tarot fortune?

Feedback

Hope this helps! Good luck with your language studies!

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chxh1335

yesterday

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Thank you so much

01.Tarot


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Yesterday I played and don't studied Language well.


Actually I have a hobby.


AI actually I have a hobby.

We aren't directly contradicting the last sentence, so I would personally move the "actually" a little further into the sentence.

Actually, I have a hobby.

That is Tarot fortune.


ThaIt is Tarot fortune.

ThaIt is Tarot fortune.

In fact, I want to know about astrology.


In fact, I want to know aboutlearn astrology.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

At first, sometimes I read tarot fortune did as hobby.


At first, I sometimes I read tarot fortune didas as hobby.

Note that "read" in this sentence should be past tense. "Read" is an irregular verb in a very strange way: both its present tense "read" and its past tense "read" are spelled the same, but they are pronounced differently (like "reed" and "red", respectively).

At first, sometimes I read tarot fortune didI did tarot readings as a hobby sometimes.

But I don't have much time to focus on this hobby everyday because of job searching.


But I don't have much time to focus on this hobby everynowadays because of job searching.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Today I will focus on language studying again.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Today, I will focus on language studyingstudying language again.

Does your country mean a lot to tarot?


Does your country mean a lot to tarot?

This sentence is grammatically correct, but I'm not sure what it means. Looking at the sentence after it, maybe you mean something like: "Is your country known for tarot?" "mean a lot to" is something we almost only use for people, when something or someone has a lot of emotional value for a person. For example: "This watch means a lot to me. My grandfather gave it to me when I was just eight years old."

Does your countrytarot reading mean a lot to tarotyour country?

Not sure if this is what you were trying to say

Or are there many people to read tarot fortune?


Or are there many people twho read tarot fortune?

Or are there many people to readhat do tarot fortunereading?

Yesterday I played and don't studied language well.


Yesterday I played [?], and doidn't studiedy language wellmuch.

It feels like there should be an activity where the [?] is. Otherwise, you could say something like "Yesterday I just played around", if you want to be general. When speaking in past tense like this, in a chain of multiple verbs, the FIRST verb should be past tense, not the last one. "I didn't study", "She couldn't go", "You wouldn't leave", etc.

Yesterday I played and doidn't studiedy language well.

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