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ponta

May 14, 2021

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Today, I was assigned a laboratory as I hoped. I have studied hard for two years after getting into my university. Its gladness is enormous. I can say it was the happiest in the past two years. The lab is about space exploration. Since I was a child, I have always wanted space. In the lab, there are a lot of people who I've looked up to. I think this is not my goal but my new start.

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Today, I was assigned a laboratory as I hopedI was accepted into the laboratory I wanted today.

US casual alternatives:

- Today I was assigned the laboratory I had hoped for.
- I got into the laboratory I wanted today!

I have studied hard for two years after getting into my university.

Its gladness is enormous.'m so happy!

This is more natural in the US.

- This is terrific!

Other US casual alternatives:

- I can't believe it!

- This is so awesome!

I can say it wasI'm the happiest I've been in the past two years.

The lab's research is about space exploration.

This is a more common way to say it in the US.

Since I was a child, I have always wanted to learn about space.

Same correction as previous corrector.

In the lab, there are a lot of people who I've looked up toI admire.

US alternative

I think this is not my goal but my new start.

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ponta

May 15, 2021

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どうもありがとうございます!

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Today, I was assigned to a laboratory, as I had hoped.

Are you saying you were assigned to a specific lab that you hoped to get into, or that you were hoping to get assigned to any lab? If the first one, then it should be: "Today, I was assigned to the laboratory I hoped to get into."

I have studied hard for two years after getting into my university.

Its gladnessMy joy is enormous.

I can say it was the happiest I've felt in the past two years.

The lab is about's focus is space exploration.

Since I was a child, I have always wanted to learn about space.

In the lab, there are a lot of people who I've looked up to.

I think this is not my goal but my new start.

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ponta

May 15, 2021

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Thank you for your correction!

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Today, I was assigned a laboratory as I hoped.


Today, I was assigned to a laboratory, as I had hoped.

Are you saying you were assigned to a specific lab that you hoped to get into, or that you were hoping to get assigned to any lab? If the first one, then it should be: "Today, I was assigned to the laboratory I hoped to get into."

Today, I was assigned a laboratory as I hopedI was accepted into the laboratory I wanted today.

US casual alternatives: - Today I was assigned the laboratory I had hoped for. - I got into the laboratory I wanted today!

I have studied hard for two years after getting into my university.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Its gladness is enormous.


Its gladnessMy joy is enormous.

Its gladness is enormous.'m so happy!

This is more natural in the US. - This is terrific! Other US casual alternatives: - I can't believe it! - This is so awesome!

I can say it was the happiest in the past two years.


I can say it was the happiest I've felt in the past two years.

I can say it wasI'm the happiest I've been in the past two years.

The lab is about space exploration.


The lab is about's focus is space exploration.

The lab's research is about space exploration.

This is a more common way to say it in the US.

Since I was a child, I have always wanted space.


Since I was a child, I have always wanted to learn about space.

Since I was a child, I have always wanted to learn about space.

Same correction as previous corrector.

In the lab, there are a lot of people who I've looked up to.


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In the lab, there are a lot of people who I've looked up toI admire.

US alternative

I think this is not my goal but my new start.


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