April 3, 2025
Today, I want to write about all our parents. We always love each other, but we don't always express our feelings or say kind words. Deep down, we know that we love, respect and support one another. This is shown in our actions - when someone in the family is sick, we worry and help, when someone has good news, we rejoice together. Wee may not say it out loud, but we show it through what we do.
Sometimes we forget that our family is our treasure, because not all people have parents, not all people have relatives. We often fight with our parents, including me, and I tell them complaints. But they've worked all their lives to feed us, and we should have a conscience, we should understand how much it hurts. I'm not saying that we owe them anything, that they want something from us, they just deserve to hear only good words, see good deeds from us.
Deep down, we know that we love, respect, and support one another.
This is shown in our actions - when someone in the family is sick, we worry and help, w. When someone has good news, we rejoice together.
Wee may not say it out loud, but we show it through what we do.
Sometimes we forget that our family is our treasure, because not all people. Not everybody haves parents, not all peopleeverybody haves relatives.
We all often fight with our parents, including me, and I tell them. I often complaints to them.
But they've worked all their lives to feed us, and we should have a conscience, wcompassion for them. We should understand how much it hurts.
"conscience" is just your mind telling you what's right and wrong, compassion would be more fitting.
I'm not saying that we owe them anything, or that they want something from us, t. They just deserve to hear only good words, and see good deeds from us.
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You wrote this very well, and I do agree, I also need to be more grateful to my parents
Wee may not say it out loud, but we show it through what we do.
WeAll of us, myself included, often fight with our parents, including me, and I tell them complaints.and I complain about them
"tell them complaints" sounds like you're telling your parents your complaints about things that are not your parents.
I'm not saying that we owe them anything, or that they want something from us, t. They just deserve to hear only good words, and to see good deeds from us.
This sounds a bit better as two seperate sentences, I think.
This is shown inthrough our actions - when someone in the family is sick, we worry and help, and when someone has good news, we rejoice together.
Wee may not say it out loud, but we show it through what we do.
Sometimes we forget that our family is our treasure, because not all people have parents, not all people have or relatives.
We often fight with our parents, including me, and I tell them complaintscomplain about them.
But they've worked all their lives to feed us, and w. We should have a conscience, we shoul and understand how much it hurts them.
I'm not saying that we owe them aneverything, that they want something from us, t. They just deserve to hear only good words, and see good deeds from us.
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Well done! I completely agree with you
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I think you forgot the title...
Today, I want to write about all our parents.
"all" is unncessary here and sounds a bit awkward.
We always love each other, but we don't always express our feelings or say kind words.
This perfectly correct, but would sound more natural saying "We know that we love each other, but we don't always express our feelings or say kind words."
Deep down, we know that we love, respect and support one another.
This is shown inthrough our actions - when someone in the family is sick, we worry and help, when someone has good news, we rejoice together.
Wee may not say it out loud, but we show it through what we do.
Minor spelling mistake.
Sometimes we forget that our family is our treasure, because not all people have parents, not all people have relatives.
We often fight with our parents, including me, and I tell them complaints about them.
But they've worked all their lives to feed us, and we should have a conscience, we should understand how much it hurts.
It would be better to split this into two shorter sentences.
I'm not saying that we owe them anything, or that they wanexpect something from us, theybut just that they deserve to hear only good words, and see good deeds from us.
I just added a few words to improve clarity.
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Very well written and I agree totally with your thoughts. It's easier to appreciate your parents more as we grow older.
. . I think you forgot the title... |
Today, I want to write about all our parents. Today, I want to write about "all" is unncessary here and sounds a bit awkward. |
We always love each other, but we don't always express our feelings or say kind words. We always love each other, but we don't always express our feelings or say kind words. This perfectly correct, but would sound more natural saying "We know that we love each other, but we don't always express our feelings or say kind words." |
Deep down, we know that we love, respect and support one another. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Deep down, we know |
This is shown in our actions - when someone in the family is sick, we worry and help, when someone has good news, we rejoice together. This is shown This is shown This is shown in our actions - when someone in the family is sick, we worry and help |
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Sometimes we forget that our family is our treasure, because not all people have parents, not all people have relatives. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Sometimes we forget that our family is our treasure, because not all people have parents Sometimes we forget that our family is our treasure |
We often fight with our parents, including me, and I tell them complaints. We often fight with our parents, including me, and I We often fight with our parents, including me, and I
"tell them complaints" sounds like you're telling your parents your complaints about things that are not your parents. We all often fight with our parents, including me |
But they've worked all their lives to feed us, and we should have a conscience, we should understand how much it hurts. But they've worked all their lives to feed us, and we should have a conscience, we should understand how much it hurts. It would be better to split this into two shorter sentences. But they've worked all their lives to feed us But they've worked all their lives to feed us, and we should have "conscience" is just your mind telling you what's right and wrong, compassion would be more fitting. |
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