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Sollensi

Jan. 1, 2026

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일월 목요일.

안녕하세요. 제 이름은 올렐리예요.
저는 초등학교 교사예요. 저는 마흔여덟살이에요.
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11일 목요일.

안녕하세요.

제 이름은 올렐리예요.

저는 초등학교 교사예요.

저는 마흔여덟 살이에요.

저는 프랑스 사람이에요.

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Bonjour Aurélie et bienvenue sur LangCorrect ! Votre texte est déjà très clair pour un début, bravo. J’ai juste deux petites suggestions pour vous aider à progresser.
Pour la date, il est d’usage en coréen de préciser le numéro du jour, par exemple : 1월 1일 목요일, car le mois seul n’est pas utilisé comme titre. De plus, il faut toujours mettre un espace avant le mot 살, car il s’agit d’un nom dépendant, ce qui donne 마흔여덟 살.
C’est un excellent début, et j’ai hâte de lire vos prochaines publications !

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Sollensi

Jan. 1, 2026

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감사합니다 !

일월 목요일.

잘 쓰셨어요! 보통 한국인이 날짜를 표시할땐
몇 월 몇 일, 무슨 요일 << 요 형식을 자주 써요. 오늘은 날짜가 빠졌네요

안녕하세요.

제 이름은 올렐리예요.

저는 초등학교 교사예요.

저는 마흔여덟살이에요.

저는 프랑스 사람이에요.

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안녕하세요 올렐리! Bonjour!
Je m’appelle Ivy, J'apprends le français. Enchantée! 앞으로 자주 만나요!

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Sollensi

Jan. 1, 2026

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Bonjour, je suis ravie de faire votre connaissance ! N'hésitez pas à me demander de corriger vos textes en français. Je débute en coréen, j'en suis vraiment au tout début de mon apprentissage, je suis donc obligée de vous répondre en français (je peux aussi répondre en anglais). A bientôt ! Aurélie

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IvyDPlum

Jan. 2, 2026

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Thank you for your offer!! My French level is super low... I can only make simple sentences with the present tense, haha. Let's study together this year!

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Sollensi

Jan. 2, 2026

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I would love that, thank you ! I think a diary in korean will help me, you might try it in french ? I only learned hangeul and two lessons so far from my korean textbook, so your french is probably better than my korean ! And by the way, the present tense in french is really hard even for french people, especially young students. Don't be afraid to make mistakes. I hope you will forgive my own mistakes in korean (and in english, because I really need to improve too !).

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IvyDPlum

Jan. 2, 2026

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If you learn Hangeul, you are already half there! I love your idea. Unfortunately this website can only allows up to two languages for free, I might switch my one of languages to French! Let’s gooooo

일월 목요일.


일월 목요일.

잘 쓰셨어요! 보통 한국인이 날짜를 표시할땐 몇 월 몇 일, 무슨 요일 << 요 형식을 자주 써요. 오늘은 날짜가 빠졌네요

11일 목요일.

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