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Toluwani

Sept. 8, 2025

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看红月亮

‎今天早上在刷手机的时候看到了一个人说她昨天看到了红月亮。他们说是月食。所以我去我告诉我妈,她说她看过新闻,在7日非洲会看到这个红月亮。她还说今天很有可能会有红月亮。所以我今天晚上去看月亮。我先去看的时候,没看见月亮。后来从我房间的窗户看到满月,但不是红色的。


This morning, while scrolling on my phone, I saw someone say that they had seen a red moon yesterday. They said it was a lunar eclipse. So I went to tell my mom, and she said she saw the news,
that on the 7th, the red moon would be visible in Africa. She also said that there was a good chance we might see it today.

So tonight I went out to look at the moon. At first, I didn't see the moon. Later, I saw a full moon from my room's window, but it wasn’t red.

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看红月亮

‎今天早上在刷手机的时候看到了一个人说她昨天看到了红月亮。

他们说是月食。

所以我去我告诉我妈,她说她看过新闻,在7日非洲非洲在7号会看到这个红月亮。

7日容易有误会,可以是九月七日,也可以是seven days

她还说今天很有可能会有红月亮。

所以我今天晚上去看月亮。

一开始去看的时候,没看见月亮。

后来从我房间的窗户看到满月,但不是红色的。

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Toluwani

Sept. 10, 2025

36

谢谢您。

看红月亮

‎今天早上在刷手机的时候看到了一个人说她昨天看到了红月亮。

他们说是月食。

所以我去我告诉我妈,她说她看过新闻,在7日(前面加月份感觉念得更通顺点)非洲会看到这个红月亮。

她还说今天很有可能会有红月亮。

所以我今天晚上去看月亮。

我先去看的时候,没看见月亮。

后来从我房间的窗户看到满月,但不是红色的。

Feedback

我看了ヾ(❀╹◡╹)ノ~
但是那天就睡了2+2小时。。。
第二天还要上学。。

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Toluwani

Sept. 10, 2025

36

哦,红月亮很美吗?

谢谢您。准您学习顺利。

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tannochikura

Sept. 10, 2025

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“祝”您学习顺利。

看红月亮


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‎今天早上在刷手机的时候看到了一个人说她昨天看到了红月亮。


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他们说是月食。


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所以我去我告诉我妈,她说她看过新闻,在7日非洲会看到这个红月亮。


所以我去我告诉我妈,她说她看过新闻,在7日(前面加月份感觉念得更通顺点)非洲会看到这个红月亮。

所以我去我告诉我妈,她说她看过新闻,在7日非洲非洲在7号会看到这个红月亮。

7日容易有误会,可以是九月七日,也可以是seven days

她还说今天很有可能会有红月亮。


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所以我今天晚上去看月亮。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

所以我今天晚上去看月亮。

我先去看的时候,没看见月亮。


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一开始去看的时候,没看见月亮。

后来从我房间的窗户看到满月,但不是红色的。


后来从我房间的窗户看到满月,但不是红色的。

后来从我房间的窗户看到满月,但不是红色的。

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