lsk_pen's avatar
lsk_pen

July 29, 2023

0
珍珠奶茶

有一次,我想喝珍珠奶茶。所以,我去了一家珍珠奶茶馆, 点了珍珠奶茶。只用汉语,我告诉服务员我要一杯珍珠奶茶。他不知道我说什么了。我又问:“我要一杯珍珠奶茶。” 走以前,他脸上显出困惑的神情。

服务员回来带了一杯热牛奶。我发现我的发音不太好!


One time, I wanted a boba milk tea. So, I went to a boba milk tea shop, and ordered one. Using Chinese, I asked the waiter for one boba milk tea. He did not know what I said. I asked again, "Can I have a cup of boba milk tea?" Before leaving [to make my drink], he looked confused.

When the waiter came back, he brought a cup of warm milk. I found out my pronunciation is not very good!

Corrections

珍珠奶茶

有一次,我想喝珍珠奶茶。

所以,我去了一家珍珠奶茶馆, 点了珍珠奶茶。

只用汉语,我告诉服务员我要一杯珍珠奶茶。

他不知道我说什么

我又:“我要一杯珍珠奶茶‘’

” 走以走之前,他脸上显出困惑的神情。



服务员回来带了一杯热牛奶。

我发现我的发音不太好!

atlantony's avatar
atlantony

Aug. 6, 2023

0

服务员回来却带了一杯热牛奶。

Jack's avatar
Jack

Aug. 6, 2023

4

服务员回来却带了一杯热牛奶。

加个却字更好。

0

珍珠奶茶

有一次,我想喝珍珠奶茶。

所以,我去了一家珍珠奶茶馆, 点了珍珠奶茶。

只用汉语,我告诉服务员我要一杯珍珠奶茶。

他不知道我说什么

我又:“我要一杯珍珠奶茶。

” 走以前,他脸上显出困惑的神情。



服务员回来带了一杯热牛奶。

我发现我的发音不太好!

Feedback

写的很棒,很有趣的经历

所以,我去了一家珍珠奶茶馆(奶茶店), 点了珍珠奶茶。

他不知道我说什么



服务员回来带了一杯热牛奶。

Feedback

写的好。

lsk_pen's avatar
lsk_pen

July 29, 2023

0

谢谢!

珍珠奶茶


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

有一次,我想喝珍珠奶茶。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

所以,我去了一家珍珠奶茶馆, 点了珍珠奶茶。


所以,我去了一家珍珠奶茶馆(奶茶店), 点了珍珠奶茶。

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

只用汉语,我告诉服务员我要一杯珍珠奶茶。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

他不知道我说什么了。


他不知道我说什么

他不知道我说什么

他不知道我说什么

我又问:“我要一杯珍珠奶茶。


我又:“我要一杯珍珠奶茶。

我又:“我要一杯珍珠奶茶‘’

” 走以前,他脸上显出困惑的神情。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

” 走以走之前,他脸上显出困惑的神情。

服务员回来带了一杯热牛奶。




服务员回来带了一杯热牛奶。



服务员回来带了一杯热牛奶。



服务员回来带了一杯热牛奶。

我发现我的发音不太好!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

You need LangCorrect Premium to access this feature.

Go Premium