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April 22, 2025

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李明和王芳的上周末

上周木, 李明和他的朋友王芳去了公园。他们去了做公共汽车。天气很好,是晴天,不冷。公园里有很多人。有人在跑步,有人在跳舞,还有人和孩子一起玩。 李明和王芳带了吃的和喝的。他们找到一个安静的方坐一下。他们聊天,吃,笑。下午,他们拍了很多照片。五点,他们回家了。他们有点儿累,但是很高兴。


Last weekend, Li Ming and his friend Wang Fang went to the park.
They went there by bus.
The weather was very good, it was sunny and not cold.
There were many people in the park.
Some people were running, some were dancing, and some were playing with children.
Li Ming and Wang Fang brought food and drinks.
They found a quiet place and sat down.
They talked, ate, and laughed.
In the afternoon, they took many pictures.
At five o'clock, they went home.
They were a little tired, but very happy.

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李明和王芳的上周末

上周, 李明和他的朋友王芳去了公园。

他们去了做公共汽车去的

天气很好,是晴天,不冷。

公园里有很多人。

有人在跑步,有人在跳舞,还有人和孩子一起玩。

李明和王芳带了吃的和喝的。

他们找到一个安静的方坐

他们聊天,吃,边吃边笑。

下午,他们拍了很多照片。

五点,他们回家了。

他们有点儿累,但是很高兴。

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0xb4dca7

April 22, 2025

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谢谢!有什么不同:“他们找到” 还是 “他们找了”?

李明和王芳的上周末

上周, 李明和他的朋友王芳去了公园。

他们去公共汽车。

天气很好,是晴天,不冷。

公园里有很多人。

有人在跑步,有人在跳舞,还有人和孩子一起玩。

李明和王芳带了吃的和喝的。

他们找到一个安静的方坐一下了下来

他们聊天,吃,笑。

他们边吃边聊。

下午,他们拍了很多照片。

五点,他们回家了。

他们有点儿累,但是很高兴。

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0xb4dca7

April 22, 2025

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谢谢!有什么不同:“他们聊天,吃,笑。” 和 “他们边吃边聊。”?

李明和王芳的上周末


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李明和王芳的上周末

上周木, 李明和他的朋友王芳去了公园。


上周, 李明和他的朋友王芳去了公园。

上周, 李明和他的朋友王芳去了公园。

他们去了做公共汽车。


他们去公共汽车。

他们去了做公共汽车去的

天气很好,是晴天,不冷。


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公园里有很多人。


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有人在跑步,有人在跳舞,还有人和孩子一起玩。


有人在跑步,有人在跳舞,还有人和孩子一起玩。

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李明和王芳带了吃的和喝的。


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他们找到一个安静的方坐一下。


他们找到一个安静的方坐一下了下来

他们找到一个安静的方坐

他们聊天,吃,笑。


他们聊天,吃,笑。

他们边吃边聊。

他们聊天,吃,边吃边笑。

下午,他们拍了很多照片。


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五点,他们回家了。


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五点,他们回家了。

他们有点儿累,但是很高兴。


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