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May 13, 2025

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朋友得生日

昨天是我朋友的生日,他邀请了我去Pizza Hut吃比萨。在那里,我朋友点了两个比萨,我的另外三个朋友也一起吃比萨。吃完了以后,我们都直接去市场看电影,这部电影是恐怖片。虽然我首先感到一点儿害怕但是我朋友让我保持勇敢。


Yesterday is my friend's birthday, he invited me to eat pizza at Pizza Hut. There, my friends ordered two pizza, my other 3 friends also joined to eat. After eating, we directly go to mall to watch movie, this movie's genre is horror. Even though I felt a bit scared at first but my friends allow me to stay brave.

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朋友生日

昨天是我朋友的生日,他邀请我去Pizza Hut必胜客吃比萨。

在那里,我朋友点了两个比萨,我的另外三个朋友也一起吃比萨。

吃完了以后,我们直接去市场商场的电影院看电影,这部电影是恐怖片。

虽然我首先感到点儿害怕但是我朋友让我保持鼓励我要勇敢。

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Jevon

May 13, 2025

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鼓励-》encourage
谢谢!

朋友生日

昨天是我朋友的生日,他邀请了我去Pizza Hut吃比萨。

Yesterday is my friend's birthday, he invited me to eat pizza at Pizza Hut. There, my friends ordered two pizza, my other 3 friends also joined to eat. After eating, we directly go to mall to watch movie, this movie's genre is horror. Even though I felt a bit scared at first but my friends allow me to stay brave.

在那里,我朋友点了两个比萨,我的另外三个朋友也一起吃比萨。

吃完了以后,我们都直接去市场看电影,这部电影是恐怖片。

虽然我首先开始时感到一点儿害怕我朋友让我保持勇敢。

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Jevon

May 13, 2025

7

开始时->at start
谢谢!

朋友生日

昨天是我朋友的生日,他邀请了我去Pizza Hut吃比萨。

在那里,我朋友点了两个比萨,我的另外三个朋友也一起吃比萨。

吃完了以后,我们都直接去市场看电影,这部电影是恐怖片。

虽然我首先感到一点儿害怕但是我朋友让我保持勇敢。

昨天是我朋友的生日,他邀请我去必胜客吃披萨。在那里,我的朋友点了两个披萨,另外三个朋友也过来一起吃。吃完后,我们直接去商场看电影,这部电影是恐怖片。尽管一开始我有点害怕,但朋友们鼓励我要勇敢。

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Jevon

May 13, 2025

7

谢谢!

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昨天是我朋友的生日,他邀请了我去Pizza Hut吃比萨。


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昨天是我朋友的生日,他邀请了我去Pizza Hut吃比萨。

Yesterday is my friend's birthday, he invited me to eat pizza at Pizza Hut. There, my friends ordered two pizza, my other 3 friends also joined to eat. After eating, we directly go to mall to watch movie, this movie's genre is horror. Even though I felt a bit scared at first but my friends allow me to stay brave.

昨天是我朋友的生日,他邀请我去Pizza Hut必胜客吃比萨。

在那里,我朋友点了两个比萨,我的另外三个朋友也一起吃比萨。


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在那里,我朋友点了两个比萨,我的另外三个朋友也一起吃比萨。

吃完了以后,我们都直接去市场看电影,这部电影是恐怖片。


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吃完了以后,我们直接去市场商场的电影院看电影,这部电影是恐怖片。

虽然我首先感到一点儿害怕但是我朋友让我保持勇敢。


虽然我首先感到一点儿害怕但是我朋友让我保持勇敢。

昨天是我朋友的生日,他邀请我去必胜客吃披萨。在那里,我的朋友点了两个披萨,另外三个朋友也过来一起吃。吃完后,我们直接去商场看电影,这部电影是恐怖片。尽管一开始我有点害怕,但朋友们鼓励我要勇敢。

虽然我首先开始时感到一点儿害怕我朋友让我保持勇敢。

虽然我首先感到点儿害怕但是我朋友让我保持鼓励我要勇敢。

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