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March 25, 2025

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我的猫

我有一只黑色的猫,猫很喜欢睡觉也吃饼干。一天我找不到我的猫,我很着急。我跟妈妈说:我们有一个题!我的猫不在房子里!我造不到它!我们有我的猫照片很多,所以我拿一个照片和我去外面。每人我看到我问:你见了这个猫吗?但是他们不见我的猫。我很关系,我的猫在那里?些时间之后我听到我的猫,我见我的猫在树上!有只猫很难!


I have a black cat, my can likes to sleep and eat cookies. One day I could not find my cat, I was very worried. I told my mom: We have a problem! The cat it's not in the house. I can't find him! We have a lot of photos from our cat, so I took one and went outside. I asked to every person: Did you see this cat? But they did not see my cat. I was very concerned, where is my cat? After some time I heard my cat, I could see the cat on the tree! Having a cat is very difficult!

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我的猫

一天我找不到我的猫,我很着急。

我跟妈妈说:我们有一个问题/困难

we are usually understand this word is “Study the topic”.“题”

我的猫不在房子里!

you can say:猫不在房子里!

不到它!

我们有我的猫照片很多,所以我拿一个照片和我去外面很多我家猫的照片,所以我拿了一张照片出去了

每人我问我看到我问的每一个人:你见这个猫吗?

但是他们不见都没见过我的猫。

我很关心/担心/着急,我的猫在那里?

i think your mean is care for your cat?

些时间之后我听到我的猫的叫声,我见我的猫在树上!

有只猫很难!

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lol i have four cats,the are Garfield.
and i had a dog,its a boy .
he is living with my parents now.
he often plays outside by himself.
because i get up late
he must plays outside on 6:00AM
i want you to see my pictures for my cat,but i don't kown what can i do for you can see my pictures

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250093811

March 25, 2025

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i'm very worry when he plays outside by himself

我有一只黑色的猫,猫很喜欢睡觉吃饼干。

我跟妈妈说:我们有一个题遇到一个麻烦

不到它!

我们有很多我的猫照片很多,所以我拿一个照片和我去外面。

中文形容词一般放前面

每人我看到每个人我都问:你见这个猫吗?

但是他们不见都没见过我的猫。

我很关系,我的猫在那里?

一段时间之后我听到我的猫,我见我的猫在树上!

过了一会儿 更加好

有只猫很难!

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多注意词与词的顺序
每人我看到 错
我有照片很多 不太好

我的猫

我有一只黑色的猫,很喜欢睡觉,也爱吃饼干。

I have a black cat, my can likes to sleep and eat cookies. One day I could not find my cat, I was very worried. I told my mom: We have a problem! The cat it's not in the house. I can't find him! We have a lot of photos from our cat, so I took one and went outside. I asked to every person: Did you see this cat? But they did not see my cat. I was very concerned, where is my cat? After some time I heard my cat, I could see the cat on the tree! Having a cat is very difficult!

一天,我突然找不到我的猫了。我很着急。

我跟妈妈说:我们有一个突发状况

我的猫不在房子里!

不到它!

我们有很多我的猫照片很多,所以我拿一个照片和我去外面。

每人我看到我我见人就问:你见了这个过这只猫吗?

但是他们不见没见过我的猫。

我很关系,我的猫在里?

些时间过了一会儿之后我听到我的猫,我看到我的猫在树上!

只猫很难!

我的猫


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我有一只黑色的猫,猫很喜欢睡觉也吃饼干。


我有一只黑色的猫,很喜欢睡觉,也爱吃饼干。

I have a black cat, my can likes to sleep and eat cookies. One day I could not find my cat, I was very worried. I told my mom: We have a problem! The cat it's not in the house. I can't find him! We have a lot of photos from our cat, so I took one and went outside. I asked to every person: Did you see this cat? But they did not see my cat. I was very concerned, where is my cat? After some time I heard my cat, I could see the cat on the tree! Having a cat is very difficult!

我有一只黑色的猫,猫很喜欢睡觉吃饼干。

一天我找不到我的猫,我很着急。


一天,我突然找不到我的猫了。我很着急。

一天我找不到我的猫,我很着急。

我跟妈妈说:我们有一个题!


我跟妈妈说:我们有一个突发状况

我跟妈妈说:我们有一个题遇到一个麻烦

我跟妈妈说:我们有一个问题/困难

we are usually understand this word is “Study the topic”.“题”

我的猫不在房子里!


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我的猫不在房子里!

you can say:猫不在房子里!

我造不到它!


不到它!

不到它!

不到它!

我们有我的猫照片很多,所以我拿一个照片和我去外面。


我们有很多我的猫照片很多,所以我拿一个照片和我去外面。

我们有很多我的猫照片很多,所以我拿一个照片和我去外面。

中文形容词一般放前面

我们有我的猫照片很多,所以我拿一个照片和我去外面很多我家猫的照片,所以我拿了一张照片出去了

每人我看到我问:你见了这个猫吗?


每人我看到我我见人就问:你见了这个过这只猫吗?

每人我看到每个人我都问:你见这个猫吗?

每人我问我看到我问的每一个人:你见这个猫吗?

但是他们不见我的猫。


但是他们不见没见过我的猫。

但是他们不见都没见过我的猫。

但是他们不见都没见过我的猫。

我很关系,我的猫在那里?


我很关系,我的猫在里?

我很关系,我的猫在那里?

我很关心/担心/着急,我的猫在那里?

i think your mean is care for your cat?

些时间之后我听到我的猫,我见我的猫在树上!


些时间过了一会儿之后我听到我的猫,我看到我的猫在树上!

一段时间之后我听到我的猫,我见我的猫在树上!

过了一会儿 更加好

些时间之后我听到我的猫的叫声,我见我的猫在树上!

有只猫很难!


只猫很难!

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