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Rae

June 2, 2025

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我理想的一天

对我来说,完美的一天很简单。
我早上吃早餐,早餐不需要太复杂。
我和我的伴侣还有奶奶一起住。

我去上班,希望工作早点或者准时结束。
我学习,也保持很有活力。
完成学习和工作后,我感觉很满意。

当我能有效地学习很多语言时,我很高兴。
有时候我通过做一些额外的工作来放松自己。
我喜欢和朋友聊天,放松自己。
这样的日子让我很开心。

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我理想的一天

对我来说,完美的一天很简单。

我早上吃早餐,早餐不需要太复杂。

我和我的伴侣还有奶奶一起住。

我去上班,希望工作早点或者准时结束。

我学习,也保持很有活力。

完成学习和工作后,我感觉很满意。

当我能有效地学习很多语言时,我很高兴。

有时候我通过做一些额外的工作来放松自己。

我喜欢和朋友聊天,放松自己。

这样的日子让我很开心。

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Rae

June 4, 2025

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谢谢你。

我理想的一天

对我来说,完美的一天很简单。


我早上吃早餐,早餐不需要太复杂简单就好

"早餐简单就好"更自然

我和我的伴侣还有奶奶一起住。

我去上班,希望工作早点或者准时结束。


我学习,也保持很有活力。

有时候我通过做一些额外的工作来放松自己。

我喜欢和朋友聊天,放松自己。

这样的日子让我很开心。

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Rae

June 3, 2025

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谢谢你。

我理想的一天


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对我来说,完美的一天很简单。


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我早上吃早餐,早餐不需要太复杂。



我早上吃早餐,早餐不需要太复杂简单就好

"早餐简单就好"更自然

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我和我的伴侣还有奶奶一起住。


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我去上班,希望工作早点或者准时结束。


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我学习,也保持很有活力。



我学习,也保持很有活力。

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完成学习和工作后,我感觉很满意。


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当我能有效地学习很多语言时,我很高兴。


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有时候我通过做一些额外的工作来放松自己。


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我喜欢和朋友聊天,放松自己。


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这样的日子让我很开心。


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