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louise

May 4, 2021

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我带

如果我应该去岛,我带水。我也带雨伞,以为太阳太热。我不要晒斑!


If I had to go to an island, I would bring water. I would also bring an umbrella because the sun is very hot. I don't want to get a sun burn!

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应该带什么?

如果我应该去岛,我带水要去一个岛上,我会带上水,还会带上一把雨伞。因为天太热,我怕晒伤

我也带雨伞,以为太阳太热。

我不要晒斑!

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louise

May 5, 2021

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谢谢!

如果我应该去不得不去一座荒岛,我带水。

应该 should
必须/不得不 must/have to
不得不 is more negative than 必须. 不得不 means being forced.

an uninhabited island --> 一座荒岛

也带还会带把雨伞,为太阳太

太阳 is 晒
天气 is 热

我不要晒斑想被晒伤

sun burn = 晒伤

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Good work! ☺️

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louise

May 5, 2021

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谢谢!

我带


应该带什么?

如果我应该去岛,我带水。


如果我应该去不得不去一座荒岛,我带水。

应该 should 必须/不得不 must/have to 不得不 is more negative than 必须. 不得不 means being forced. an uninhabited island --> 一座荒岛

如果我应该去岛,我带水要去一个岛上,我会带上水,还会带上一把雨伞。因为天太热,我怕晒伤

我也带雨伞,以为太阳太热。


也带还会带把雨伞,为太阳太

太阳 is 晒 天气 is 热

我也带雨伞,以为太阳太热。

我不要晒斑!


我不要晒斑想被晒伤

sun burn = 晒伤

我不要晒斑!

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