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samblin

May 19, 2021

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我学习和读了。

昨天我在学习汉语为3个半小时。今天我想要学习汉语为5个小时。5个小时是好。

今天的下午,我读书叫“二十三只猫”。这书是可笑。小男有过多猫。他们在坐上凡事。

一旦,我想要读武侠和仙侠书。

读,谢谢。


Yesterday I studied Chinese for 3 and a half hours. Today I want to study Chinese for 5 hours. 5 hours is good.

This afternoon, I read a book called “23 Cats”. This is a funny book. The little boy has too many cats. They sit on everything.

One day, I would like to read Wuxia and Xianxia books in Chinese.

Thanks for reading.

Corrections

昨天我学习汉语的时长为3个半小时。

昨天我学习了3个半小时汉语。sounds more natural and lingual.

今天我想要学习汉语5个小时。

In English, it's [I want to study Chinese "for" 5 hours.] In Chinese, you don't need the "for".

5个小时好。

”很好“ is a common and set expression

今天的下午,我读书叫“二十三只猫”。

这书是可很好笑。

可笑= ridiculous, 好笑 = funny

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samblin

May 20, 2021

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Thank you for your corrections.

我学习和读了。


昨天我在学习汉语为3个半小时。


昨天我学习汉语的时长为3个半小时。

昨天我学习了3个半小时汉语。sounds more natural and lingual.

今天我想要学习汉语为5个小时。


今天我想要学习汉语5个小时。

In English, it's [I want to study Chinese "for" 5 hours.] In Chinese, you don't need the "for".

5个小时是好。


5个小时好。

”很好“ is a common and set expression

今天的下午,我读书叫“二十三只猫”。


今天的下午,我读书叫“二十三只猫”。

这书是可笑。


这书是可很好笑。

可笑= ridiculous, 好笑 = funny

小男有过多猫。


他们在坐上凡事。


一旦,我想要读武侠和仙侠书。


读,谢谢。


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