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Rae

May 8, 2025

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我喜欢的季节

我喜欢的季节是冬天。冬天很冷,我喜欢冷。冬天下雪,我很高兴。雪很大,我喜欢看雪。冬天,我和家人一起玩。我们堆雪人,打雪仗。

冬天很开心。我们一起吃饭,过新年和圣诞节。和家人在一起,冬天很快乐。

我喜欢冬天的记忆。小时候,我和家人一起过冬天。雪很漂亮,我很高兴。


My favorite season is winter. It is cold in winter and I like the cold. It snows in winter and I am happy. I like to see the snow. In winter, I used to play with my family. We would build snowmen and have snowball fights.

Winter is fun. We have dinner together and celebrate New Year's and Christmas. It's fun to be with my family in winter.

I love winter memories. When I was little, I spent winter with my family. The snow was beautiful and I was happy.

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冬天很冷,我喜欢冷。

not that necessary but would be better if u add a “但”

冬天,我可以和家人一起玩。



冬天
让我们很开心。

和家人在一起冬天让我很快乐。

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Rae

May 10, 2025

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谢谢你。

我喜欢的季节

我喜欢的季节是冬天。

冬天很冷,我喜欢冷。

冬天下雪,这让我很高兴。

雪很大,我喜欢看雪。

冬天,我和家人一起玩。

我们堆雪人,打雪仗。

冬天很开心。

我们一起吃饭,过新年和圣诞节。

和家人在一起,冬天很快乐。

我喜欢冬天的记忆。

小时候,我和家人一起过冬天。

雪很漂亮,我很高兴。

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Rae

May 9, 2025

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谢谢你。

我喜欢的季节


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我喜欢的季节是冬天。


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冬天很冷,我喜欢冷。


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冬天很冷,我喜欢冷。

not that necessary but would be better if u add a “但”

冬天下雪,我很高兴。


冬天下雪,这让我很高兴。

雪很大,我喜欢看雪。


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冬天,我和家人一起玩。


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冬天,我可以和家人一起玩。

我们堆雪人,打雪仗。


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冬天很开心。


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冬天
让我们很开心。

我们一起吃饭,过新年和圣诞节。


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和家人在一起,冬天很快乐。


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和家人在一起冬天让我很快乐。

我喜欢冬天的记忆。


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小时候,我和家人一起过冬天。


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雪很漂亮,我很高兴。


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