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Jevon

June 6, 2025

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懒惰

我如今感到很懒惰,不是因为我没有必须做的东西,但是我常常找了比较感兴趣的东西。我每天学习了汉语,但是比看电影做得少多了。我知道其他人正在准备他们的将来,我在这里只玩游戏和看电影。当你想改变时,改变就会发生。我同意了但是我就没有够的动机。


These days I was really lazy, it is not because I don't have things to do, but I often found a lot more interesting things. Everyday I do study mandarin, but compare to watching movies, I did that less by a lot. I know that other person are preparing for their future, I am here only playing games and watching movies. When people wanted to change, change will happen. I agree with that but I just don't have a enough motivation.

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我如今感到很懒惰,不是因为我没有必须做的东西,是我常常找了比较感兴趣的东西。

Pay attention to the use of conjunctions

即使我知道其他人正在准备他们的将来,我在这里只但我仍然玩游戏和看电影。

我同意这个观点但是我就没有够的动机去让我行动

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Overall,the grammer knowledge still needs to be improved.There are still errors.It is also necssary to pay attention to the use of conjunctions.
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懒惰


我如今感到很懒惰,不是因为我没有必须做的东西,但是我常常找了比较感兴趣的东西。


我如今感到很懒惰,不是因为我没有必须做的东西,是我常常找了比较感兴趣的东西。

Pay attention to the use of conjunctions

我每天学习了汉语,但是比看电影做得少多了。


我知道其他人正在准备他们的将来,我在这里只玩游戏和看电影。


即使我知道其他人正在准备他们的将来,我在这里只但我仍然玩游戏和看电影。

当你想改变时,改变就会发生。


我同意了但是我就没有够的动机。


我同意这个观点但是我就没有够的动机去让我行动

There is still more to be said here.It needs to be completed

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