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Toluwani

Dec. 30, 2024

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宝宝和饼干

今天有一个宝宝在哭因为他想吃饼干。但他的妈妈不想给他饼干因为没有,也不想让他习惯了。于是只能求他别哭。一会儿他停下来,几秒钟后,他又开始哭。幸亏在我的包里我有饼干。所以我给他,给他后他就没哭了。吃了饼干后,就开始玩儿😅。


Today there was a baby crying because he wanted to eat biscuit. But his mother didn't want to give him biscuit because she didn't have any and didn't want him to get used to eating biscuit. So she could only beg him not to cry. After a while he stopped crying, and after a few seconds, he started crying again. Fortunately I had biscuit in my bag. So I gave it to him, and he stopped crying after I gave it to him. After eating the cookies, he started playing 😅.

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宝宝和饼干

今天有一个宝宝在哭因为他想吃饼干。

Today there was a baby crying because he wanted to eat biscuit. But his mother didn't want to give him biscuit because she didn't have any and didn't want him to get used to eating biscuit. So she could only beg him not to cry. After a while he stopped crying, and after a few seconds, he started crying again. Fortunately I had biscuit in my bag. So I gave it to him, and he stopped crying after I gave it to him. After eating the cookies, he started playing

但他的妈妈不想给他饼干因为没有,也不想让他养成习惯

于是只能求他别哭。

一会儿他停下来,几秒钟后,他又开始哭。

幸亏我的包里有饼干。

所以我给他,给他后他就没哭了。

吃了饼干后,就开始玩儿😅。

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可能他饿了😄

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Toluwani

Dec. 31, 2024

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对啊。谢谢您❤️。

今天有一个宝宝在哭因为他想吃饼干。

但他的妈妈不想给他饼干因为没有,而且也不想让他习惯了上瘾

*而且也不想让他上瘾
or 而且也不想给他吃太多
or 而且也不想给他养成吃饼干的习惯

过了一会儿他停下来不哭了,几秒钟后,他又开始哭。

幸亏我的包里有饼干。

所以我给他,给他后他就哭了。

吃了饼干后,就开始玩儿😅。

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好可爱的日常!

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Toluwani

Dec. 31, 2024

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谢谢您😊❤️。

宝宝和饼干


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今天有一个宝宝在哭因为他想吃饼干。


今天有一个宝宝在哭因为他想吃饼干。

今天有一个宝宝在哭因为他想吃饼干。

Today there was a baby crying because he wanted to eat biscuit. But his mother didn't want to give him biscuit because she didn't have any and didn't want him to get used to eating biscuit. So she could only beg him not to cry. After a while he stopped crying, and after a few seconds, he started crying again. Fortunately I had biscuit in my bag. So I gave it to him, and he stopped crying after I gave it to him. After eating the cookies, he started playing

但他的妈妈不想给他饼干因为没有,也不想让他习惯了。


但他的妈妈不想给他饼干因为没有,而且也不想让他习惯了上瘾

*而且也不想让他上瘾 or 而且也不想给他吃太多 or 而且也不想给他养成吃饼干的习惯

但他的妈妈不想给他饼干因为没有,也不想让他养成习惯

于是只能求他别哭。


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一会儿他停下来,几秒钟后,他又开始哭。


过了一会儿他停下来不哭了,几秒钟后,他又开始哭。

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幸亏在我的包里我有饼干。


幸亏我的包里有饼干。

幸亏我的包里有饼干。

所以我给他,给他后他就没哭了。


所以我给他,给他后他就哭了。

所以我给他,给他后他就没哭了。

吃了饼干后,就开始玩儿😅。


吃了饼干后,就开始玩儿😅。

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