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Jevon

Dec. 21, 2024

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学校的目的

我现在是一名高中学生,特别是十二年级学生。我已经上学很多年了。尽管我在学校不是积极的学生,还是我有四个真正的朋友。他们是我在学校感到快乐的原因。此外,我是聪明的学生,我常常达到了好的成绩。总结了一切,学校让我感到了很多种的感情。我不同意学校只于努力学习,然后变得聪明。对我来说,学校是一个地方于交了多朋友,聪明只是奖金。


I am currently a senior high school student, specifically a grade 12th student. I already went to school for many years. Even though I am not an active student, but I have four good friends. They are my the reason of my happiness at school. Moreover, I am a smart student, I often achieved good grades. To sum up everything, school helps me to feel various of feelings. I don't agree that school is only for studying hard, and to become a smart student. In my opinion, a school is a place for getting many friends, being smart is only a bonus.

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学校的目的

我现在是一名高中学生,特别具体来说是十二年级学生。

I am currently a senior high school student, specifically a grade 12th student. I already went to school for many years. Even though I am not an active student, but I have four good friends. They are my the reason of my happiness at school. Moreover, I am a smart student, I often achieved good grades. To sum up everything, school helps me to feel various of feelings. I don't agree that school is only for studying hard, and to become a smart student. In my opinion, a school is a place for getting many friends, being smart is only a bonus.

我已经上学很多年了。

尽管我在学校不是积极主动的学生,但我还是有四个真正的朋友。

他们是我在学校感到快乐的原因。

此外,我是聪明的学生,我常常达到了能拿到好的成绩。

结了一切而言之,学校让我体会到了很多种的感情。

我不同意学校只于努力学习,然后变得聪明智慧

对我来说,学校是一个地方于交了多朋友可以 交很多朋友的地方,聪明只是额外的奖金。

我现在是一名高中学生,特别准确地说是十二年级学生。

中国大陆不说十二年级,而说
小学1-6年级:elementary school
初中1-3年级:junior high school
高中1-3年级:high school
大学1-4年级:college or university

此外,我是聪明的学生,我常常达到取得了好的成绩。

结了一切的来说,学校让我感到了很多种的感

感情:A bond, attachment or love, it's more intensive, 用于父母之间,夫妻之间,与宠物,与家乡。
感受:feelings

我不同意认为学校只于努力学习,然后变得聪明。

对我来说,学校是一个地方于交了多朋友,聪明只是奖金交很多朋友的地方,聪明只是额外的好处

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“Text”里的内容填中文,“Native text”里的内容填英文。你可以试着重新提交你的作文^_^

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Jevon

Dec. 22, 2024

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学校的目的


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我现在是一名高中学生,特别是十二年级学生。


我现在是一名高中学生,特别准确地说是十二年级学生。

中国大陆不说十二年级,而说 小学1-6年级:elementary school 初中1-3年级:junior high school 高中1-3年级:high school 大学1-4年级:college or university

我现在是一名高中学生,特别具体来说是十二年级学生。

I am currently a senior high school student, specifically a grade 12th student. I already went to school for many years. Even though I am not an active student, but I have four good friends. They are my the reason of my happiness at school. Moreover, I am a smart student, I often achieved good grades. To sum up everything, school helps me to feel various of feelings. I don't agree that school is only for studying hard, and to become a smart student. In my opinion, a school is a place for getting many friends, being smart is only a bonus.

我已经上学很多年了。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

尽管我在学校不是积极的学生,还是我有四个真正的朋友。


尽管我在学校不是积极主动的学生,但我还是有四个真正的朋友。

他们是我在学校感到快乐的原因。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

此外,我是聪明的学生,我常常达到了好的成绩。


此外,我是聪明的学生,我常常达到取得了好的成绩。

此外,我是聪明的学生,我常常达到了能拿到好的成绩。

总结了一切,学校让我感到了很多种的感情。


结了一切的来说,学校让我感到了很多种的感

感情:A bond, attachment or love, it's more intensive, 用于父母之间,夫妻之间,与宠物,与家乡。 感受:feelings

结了一切而言之,学校让我体会到了很多种的感情。

我不同意学校只于努力学习,然后变得聪明。


我不同意认为学校只于努力学习,然后变得聪明。

我不同意学校只于努力学习,然后变得聪明智慧

对我来说,学校是一个地方于交了多朋友,聪明只是奖金。


对我来说,学校是一个地方于交了多朋友,聪明只是奖金交很多朋友的地方,聪明只是额外的好处

对我来说,学校是一个地方于交了多朋友可以 交很多朋友的地方,聪明只是额外的奖金。

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