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bea

May 8, 2025

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天气

天气预报说今天雨就会停。
晴天以后天气会怎么样?
天气预报说下个月会有一场暴风雨。
并且天气会更冷。

天气
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天气

天气预报说今天雨就会停。

晴天以后天气会怎么样?

天气预报说下个月会有一场暴风雨。

并且天气会更冷。

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暴风雨也要照顾好自己呀

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bea

May 11, 2025

74

是的,我会这么做!🙂 谢谢你!

天气

天气预报说今天雨就会停。

晴天以后天气会怎么样?

天气预报说下个月会有一场暴风雨。

并且天气会更冷。

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bea

May 9, 2025

74

谢谢你!


晴天以后天气会怎么样?

I'm not quite sure what this sentence was originally meant to say. Maybe it's trying to ask, "What will the weather be like after today?"

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Great Job!:)

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bea

May 9, 2025

74

After the beautiful weather. Great correction! :) 😀 谢谢你!

天气

天气预报说今天雨就会停。


晴天以后
之后的天气会怎么样?

天气预报说下个月会有一场暴风雨。

并且天气会更冷。

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bea

May 9, 2025

74

谢谢你!

天气

天气预报说今天雨就

把“会”去掉,加上“了”会更加口头化一些。


晴天以后
那后面天气怎么样

不用强调“晴天”,直接询问即可。


天气预报说
下个月会有一场暴风雨,天气也会更冷

与下面那句话合并起来,单独的话不符合中文习惯。“天气预报”重复了,在对话中前面已经提出了,不用再强调。


并且
下个月会有一场暴风雨,天气会更冷。

与上面那句话合并起来,单独的话不符合中文习惯。“天气预报”重复了,在对话中前面已经提出了,不用再强调。

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天气预报说今天雨就停了。
那后面天气怎么样呢?
下个月会有一场暴风雨,天气也会更冷。

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bea

May 9, 2025

74

谢谢你!

天气


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天气预报说今天雨就会停。


天气预报说今天雨就

把“会”去掉,加上“了”会更加口头化一些。

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晴天以后天气会怎么样?



晴天以后
那后面天气怎么样

不用强调“晴天”,直接询问即可。


晴天以后
之后的天气会怎么样?


晴天以后天气会怎么样?

I'm not quite sure what this sentence was originally meant to say. Maybe it's trying to ask, "What will the weather be like after today?"

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天气预报说下个月会有一场暴风雨。



天气预报说
下个月会有一场暴风雨,天气也会更冷

与下面那句话合并起来,单独的话不符合中文习惯。“天气预报”重复了,在对话中前面已经提出了,不用再强调。

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并且天气会更冷。



并且
下个月会有一场暴风雨,天气会更冷。

与上面那句话合并起来,单独的话不符合中文习惯。“天气预报”重复了,在对话中前面已经提出了,不用再强调。

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