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命名仪式

‎今天我去了命名仪式。去仪式前,我想到了我们喜欢给孩子很多名字。我去过的一个命名仪式,那个小孩有大概十多名字。当时我心里想着为什么给那么多名字。除了前三名子,小孩也很可能不会用其他名字。后来我问我妈为什么, 她说家人会想给孩子名字,而且孩子可以暗暗地用这些名字。幸亏我只有四个。记起很多名字也太麻烦了。


Today I went to a naming ceremony. Before going to the ceremony, I thought about how we like to give children many names. At a naming ceremonies I attended, the child had around ten or more names. I kept wondering, why give so many names? Apart from the first three, the child probably won’t even use the rest. Later I asked my mom why, and she said family members want to give the child names, and the child can also use those names in private. Luckily, I only have four. Remembering too many names would be too troublesome.

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命名仪式

‎今天我去了一个命名仪式。

去仪式前,我想到我们喜欢给孩子很多名字。

Today I went to a naming ceremony. Before going to the ceremony, I thought about how we like to give children many names. At a naming ceremonies I attended, the child had around ten or more names. I kept wondering, why give so many names? Apart from the first three, the child probably won’t even use the rest. Later I asked my mom why, and she said family members want to give the child names, and the child can also use those names in private. Luckily, I only have four. Remembering too many names would be too troublesome.

我去过的一个命名仪式,那个小孩有大概十多名字。

当时我心里想着为什么给那么多名字。

除了前三名子,小孩也很可能不会用其他名字。

后来我问我妈为什么, 她说家人会想给孩子名字,而且孩子可以暗暗地用这些名字。

幸亏我只有四个。

记起要记得很多名字也太麻烦了。

命名仪式

‎今天我去参加了命名仪式。

去仪式前,我想到了我们我就在想,我们为什么喜欢给孩子很多名字。

我去过的一个命名仪式,那上,一个小孩有大概十多名字。

当时我心里想着为什么给那么多名字。

除了前三名子个名字,小孩也很可能不会用其他名字。

后来我问我妈为什么, 她说家人会想给孩子名字,而且孩子可以暗暗地用这些名字。

幸亏我只有四个。

记起很多名字也太麻烦了。

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‎今天我去了命名仪式。


‎今天我去参加了命名仪式。

‎今天我去了一个命名仪式。

去仪式前,我想到了我们喜欢给孩子很多名字。


去仪式前,我想到了我们我就在想,我们为什么喜欢给孩子很多名字。

去仪式前,我想到我们喜欢给孩子很多名字。

Today I went to a naming ceremony. Before going to the ceremony, I thought about how we like to give children many names. At a naming ceremonies I attended, the child had around ten or more names. I kept wondering, why give so many names? Apart from the first three, the child probably won’t even use the rest. Later I asked my mom why, and she said family members want to give the child names, and the child can also use those names in private. Luckily, I only have four. Remembering too many names would be too troublesome.

我去过的一个命名仪式,那个小孩有大概十多名字。


我去过的一个命名仪式,那上,一个小孩有大概十多名字。

我去过的一个命名仪式,那个小孩有大概十多名字。

当时我心里想着为什么给那么多名字。


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除了前三名子,小孩也很可能不会用其他名字。


除了前三名子个名字,小孩也很可能不会用其他名字。

除了前三名子,小孩也很可能不会用其他名字。

后来我问我妈为什么, 她说家人会想给孩子名字,而且孩子可以暗暗地用这些名字。


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幸亏我只有四个。


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记起很多名字也太麻烦了。


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记起要记得很多名字也太麻烦了。

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