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April 19, 2021

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動物園之星 [Planet Zoo]

我最近玩動物園之星 [Planet Zoo]。我作的動物園有藍孔雀 [Indian Peafowl]、荒漠疣豬 [common warthog]、普通斑馬 [plains zebra]、駝鳥 [ostrich]、中美洲貘 [Baird's tapir]、卷尾猴 [white faced Capuchin]、野狗 [dingo]、紅大袋鼠 [red kangaroo]、還有澳洲考拉 [koala]。我要加獵豹 [cheetah],因為牠們會吸引了很多觀眾,所以會讓我動物園賺多錢。

New Phase:
吸引了很多觀眾 , attract a large audience


Recently I've been playing Planet Zoo. The zoo I made has: Indian peafowl, common warthogs, plains zebras, ostriches, Baird's tapirs, white faced Capuchins, dingoes, red kangaroos, and koalas. I want to add cheetahs, because they can attract a large crowd and help my zoo earn more money.

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動物園之星 [Planet Zoo]

我最近玩動物園之星 [Planet Zoo]。

的動物園有藍孔雀 [Indian Peafowl]、荒漠疣豬 [common warthog]、普通斑馬 [plains zebra]、駝鳥 [ostrich]、中美洲貘 [Baird's tapir]、卷尾猴 [white faced Capuchin]、野狗 [dingo]、紅袋鼠 [red kangaroo]、還有澳洲考拉樹熊 [koala]。

我要加一些獵豹 [cheetah],因為牠們會吸引很多觀眾,所以這樣會讓我動物園賺些錢。

New Phase:

吸引了很多觀眾 , attract a large audience

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meilemei

April 20, 2021

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感謝您唷~

動物園之星 [Planet Zoo]


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我最近玩動物園之星 [Planet Zoo]。


我最近玩動物園之星 [Planet Zoo]。

我作的動物園有藍孔雀 [Indian Peafowl]、荒漠疣豬 [common warthog]、普通斑馬 [plains zebra]、駝鳥 [ostrich]、中美洲貘 [Baird's tapir]、卷尾猴 [white faced Capuchin]、野狗 [dingo]、紅大袋鼠 [red kangaroo]、還有澳洲考拉 [koala]。


的動物園有藍孔雀 [Indian Peafowl]、荒漠疣豬 [common warthog]、普通斑馬 [plains zebra]、駝鳥 [ostrich]、中美洲貘 [Baird's tapir]、卷尾猴 [white faced Capuchin]、野狗 [dingo]、紅袋鼠 [red kangaroo]、還有澳洲考拉樹熊 [koala]。

我要加獵豹 [cheetah],因為牠們會吸引了很多觀眾,所以會讓我動物園賺多錢。


我要加一些獵豹 [cheetah],因為牠們會吸引很多觀眾,所以這樣會讓我動物園賺些錢。

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吸引了很多觀眾 , attract a large audience


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