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April 7, 2025

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再见爱人 #2

我在看第4集的《再见爱人》有一些看法。我觉得麦林有点儿让人困惑。她总是和丈夫争论但他们的争论让人看不懂。其次,扬子给了他妻子一张他与家人的图画照片。这张照片暗示他工作是最重要,但这个观点忽视了黄圣依的隐形付出,尤其家务照顾孩子。因为扬子不花时间跟他孩子,我觉得他挺过分。尽管如此我仍然觉得扬子那种爹味的性格真幽默。


I have some opinions when watching episode 4 of "Goodbye Love". I think Mailin is a bit confusing. She always argues with her husband but their arguments are incomprehensible. Secondly, Yangzi gave his wife a photo of a drawing of him and his family. This photo implies that his work is the most important, but this view ignores Huang Shengyi's invisible efforts, especially housework and child care. Because Yangzi doesn't spend time with his children, I think he's too much. Despite this, I still think that Yangzi's father-like personality is really humorous.

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再见爱人 #2

我在看第4集的《再见爱人》有一些看法。

我觉得麦林有点儿让人困惑。

她总是和丈夫争论但他们的争论让人看不懂。

其次,扬子给了他妻子一张他与家人的图画照片。

这张照片暗示他工作最重要,但这个观点忽视了黄圣依的隐形付出,尤其家务照顾孩子

因为扬子不花时间跟他孩子相处,我觉得他挺过分

尽管如此我仍然觉得扬子那种爹味的性格真幽默。

再见爱人 #2

在看第4集的《再见爱人》有一些看法。

我觉得麦林有点儿让人困惑。

她总是和丈夫争论但他们的争论让人看不懂不解

其次,扬子给了他妻子一张他与家人的图画照片。

这张照片暗示他工作是最重要,但这个观点忽了黄圣依的隐形无形的付出,尤其家务照顾孩子。

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因为扬子不花时间跟他孩子,我觉得他挺过分。

尽管如此我仍然觉得扬子那种爹味的性格真幽默。

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Good job!加油写的很好!💪

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judar

April 8, 2025

196

谢谢!!

再见爱人 #2


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我在看第4集的《再见爱人》有一些看法。


在看第4集的《再见爱人》有一些看法。

我在看第4集的《再见爱人》有一些看法。

我觉得麦林有点儿让人困惑。


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她总是和丈夫争论但他们的争论让人看不懂。


她总是和丈夫争论但他们的争论让人看不懂不解

她总是和丈夫争论但他们的争论让人看不懂。

其次,扬子给了他妻子一张他与家人的图画照片。


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这张照片暗示他工作是最重要,但这个观点忽视了黄圣依的隐形付出,尤其家务照顾孩子。


这张照片暗示他工作是最重要,但这个观点忽了黄圣依的隐形无形的付出,尤其家务照顾孩子。

👍

这张照片暗示他工作最重要,但这个观点忽视了黄圣依的隐形付出,尤其家务照顾孩子

因为扬子不花时间跟他孩子,我觉得他挺过分。


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因为扬子不花时间跟他孩子相处,我觉得他挺过分

尽管如此我仍然觉得扬子那种爹味的性格真幽默。


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