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Toluwani

June 9, 2025

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借充电宝

为了考试,我妈借我她的充电宝。我的手机需要三多四个小时充时间。所以她给我前,她说我写了我们的姓氏在充电宝上,还有一些汉字😅🤦🏽‍♀️。所以我就写了“出入平安”。


My mom lent me her power bank for the exam. My phone needs more than three or four hours to charge. So before she gave it to me, she told me to write our surname on the power bank, and some Chinese characters 😅🤦🏽‍♀️. So I wrote "Peace and safety wherever you go".

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借充电宝

为了我的考试,我妈借我她的充电宝。

My mom lent me her power bank for the exam. My phone needs more than three or four hours to charge. So before she gave it to me, she told me to write our surname on the power bank, and some Chinese characters 😅🤦🏽‍♀️. So I wrote "Peace and safety wherever you go".

我的手机需要三四个小时充时间好电

所以她给我前,她说我写了让我把我们的姓氏在充电宝上,还有再写一些汉字😅🤦🏽‍♀️。

所以我就写了“出入平安”。

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“出入平安”很不错哦,还双关了呢。

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Toluwani

June 20, 2025

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哈哈,谢谢您。

借充电宝


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为了考试,我妈借我他的充电宝。


我的手机需要三多四个小时充时间。


我的手机需要三四个小时充时间好电

所以她给我前,她说我写了我们的姓氏在充电宝上,还有一些汉字😅🤦🏽‍♀️。


所以她给我前,她说我写了让我把我们的姓氏在充电宝上,还有再写一些汉字😅🤦🏽‍♀️。

所以我就写了“出入平安”。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

为了考试,我妈借我她的充电宝。


为了我的考试,我妈借我她的充电宝。

My mom lent me her power bank for the exam. My phone needs more than three or four hours to charge. So before she gave it to me, she told me to write our surname on the power bank, and some Chinese characters 😅🤦🏽‍♀️. So I wrote "Peace and safety wherever you go".

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