Oct. 26, 2025
作文第3
撞，发愁，盼望，太太，未来
自从上个月的意外后，王太太感觉天都塌了。王先生开车撞了树，伤势极重，一直昏迷不醒。整家人的担子一下子落在她一个人肩上。眼看着积蓄一天天减少。她的心里越发发愁，感觉未来一片茫然。她知道没有退路，只能咬紧牙关。为了支付母子二人的生活费用，王太太每天不顾劳累地工作。她很久盼望会有那出一天。
作文第3
撞，发愁，盼望，太太，未来
自从上个月的意外后，王太太感觉天都塌了。
王先生开车撞了树，伤势极重，一直昏迷不醒。
整全家人的担子一下子落在她一个人肩上。
一般说“全家人”。在这里可以用“整个家庭”，我们很少用“整家人”。
眼看着积蓄一天天减少。
她的心里越发发愁，感觉未来一片茫然。
她知道没有退路，只能咬紧牙关。
为了支付母子二人的生活费用，王太太每天不顾劳累地工作。
她很久盼望会有那出头的一天。
是这个意思吗？
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母子二人？不是只有一个人出车祸了吗？这里描述的家庭里有几个人？
你是说“为了支付她和她孩子的生活费用，王太太每天不顾劳累地工作”吗
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她的心里越发发愁，感觉未来一片茫然。 This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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她知道没有退路，只能咬紧牙关。 This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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她很久盼望会有那出一天。 她 她 是这个意思吗？ |
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