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Unomaru

April 14, 2025

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Introduction of my work

I work police officer in Japan.
But I’m not an ordinary police officer.
I’m central government police officer from National Police Agency.
Now, I work at police station in adati-ku, Tokyo.
That’s because I should study practical and hands-on police works.
These works are exhausting me.

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I work as a police officer in Japan.

I’m a central government police officer from the National Police Agency.

That’s because I shouldneed to study practical and hands-on police works.

More natural to talk about "need" than "should" in this kind of situation.

Theseis works are is exhausting me.

Introduction of my work

I work as a police officer in Japan.,

This sentence and the next are better as one

I’m a central government police officer from the National Police Agency.

Now, I work at a police station in aAdatchi-kKu, Tokyo.,

Names of specific places should start with a capital letter
I believe the correct spelling is "Adachi," not "Adati"
This sentence and the next are better as one

That’s because I should study practical and hands-on police works.

Theseis works are is exhausting me.

I work as a police officer in Japan.

But, I’m not an ordinary police officer.

I’m a central government police officer from the National Police Agency.

Now, I work at a police station in aAdati-kKu, Tokyo.

That’s because I should study practical and hands-on police works.

Theseis works are exhaustings me.

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Well done!

Introduction of my work

I work as a police officer in Japan, but I'm not an ordinary police officer.

But I’m not an ordinary police officer.

These could be combined into one sentence to sound more natural and have better flow.

I’m a central government police officer from the National Police Agency.

Now, I work at a police station in adati-ku, Tokyo.

That’sI work there because I shouldneed to study practical and hands-on police works.

These works are is exhausting me.

I work as a police officer in Japan.

I’m a central government police officer from the National Police Agency.

Now, I work at the police station in adati-ku, Tokyo.

That’s because I shouldhave to study practical and hands-on police works.

Do you mean something like "field duty" by hands-on police work?

These works are exhausting me.

The job is killing me!/ These practices are exhausting...

But I’m not an ordinary police officer.


But I’m not an ordinary police officer.

These could be combined into one sentence to sound more natural and have better flow.

But, I’m not an ordinary police officer.

I’m central government police officer from National Police Agency.


I’m a central government police officer from the National Police Agency.

I’m a central government police officer from the National Police Agency.

I’m a central government police officer from the National Police Agency.

I’m a central government police officer from the National Police Agency.

I’m a central government police officer from the National Police Agency.

Now, I work at police station in adati-ku, Tokyo.


Now, I work at the police station in adati-ku, Tokyo.

Now, I work at a police station in adati-ku, Tokyo.

Now, I work at a police station in aAdati-kKu, Tokyo.

Now, I work at a police station in aAdatchi-kKu, Tokyo.,

Names of specific places should start with a capital letter I believe the correct spelling is "Adachi," not "Adati" This sentence and the next are better as one

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Introduction of my work


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I work police officer in Japan.


I work as a police officer in Japan.

I work as a police officer in Japan, but I'm not an ordinary police officer.

I work as a police officer in Japan.

I work as a police officer in Japan.,

This sentence and the next are better as one

I work as a police officer in Japan.

That’s because I should study practical and hands-on police works.


That’s because I shouldhave to study practical and hands-on police works.

Do you mean something like "field duty" by hands-on police work?

That’sI work there because I shouldneed to study practical and hands-on police works.

That’s because I should study practical and hands-on police works.

That’s because I should study practical and hands-on police works.

That’s because I shouldneed to study practical and hands-on police works.

More natural to talk about "need" than "should" in this kind of situation.

These works are exhausting me.


These works are exhausting me.

The job is killing me!/ These practices are exhausting...

These works are is exhausting me.

Theseis works are exhaustings me.

Theseis works are is exhausting me.

Theseis works are is exhausting me.

Now, I work at takenotsuka police station in adati-ku, Tokyo.


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