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Nov. 30, 2022

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上网课

November 30, 2022
In the morning. I was taking an online course in English. The reason for online classes is that Our teacher's code has turnd yellow. We were happy a lot because we can have classes in bed. It was very comfortable. I was distracted in class. Suddenly the teacher called my name, but I can't answer the teacher's question.I felt ashamed.

中文:在上午,我们上课英语线上课,线上课的原因是因为我们老师的码变成黄码了,我们很开心因为我们可以在床上上课,它非常的舒服,我在上课是分了神,突然老师点了我的名字,我不能够回答老师的问题,我感到很惭愧。

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上网课Taking an Online Class

November 30, 2022

In the morning.

This is a sentence fragment so I deleted it and appended it to the next sentence.

In the morning I was taking an online course in English.

The reason for online classes is that Oour teacher's code has turned yellow.

We were very happy a lot because we canould have classes in bed.

"could" is past tense for "can."

It was very comfortable.

I was distracted during class.

Suddenly tThe teacher suddenly called my name, but I caouldn't answer the teacher's question. I felt ashamed.

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aww, please don't be too hard on yourself. It happens. Nicely written!

November 30, 2022

In the morning.

I was takingtook an online course in English.

The reason for online classes is that Oour teacher's code hasd turned yellow.

We were very happy a lot because we can haveould attend classes in bed.

Suddenly the teacher called my name, but I caouldn't answer the teacher's question.I felt ashamed.

November 30, 2022

In the morning, I was taking....

Merge this with the next sentence.

I was taking an online course in English.

The reason for online classes iwas that Oour teacher's code hasd turned yellow.

We were very happy a lot because we can have classes inould attend class from our beds.

It was very comfortable.

I was distracted in class.

Suddenly the teacher called my name, but I caouldn't answer the teacher's question., so I felt ashamed.

中文:在上午,我们上课英语线上课,线上课的原因是因为我们老师的码变成黄码了,我们很开心因为我们可以在床上上课,它非常的舒服,我在上课分了神,突然老师点了我的名字,我不能够回答老师的问题,我感到很惭愧。

November 30, 2022

In the morning.

I was takingtook an online course in English.

The reason for the online classes iwas that Oour teacher's code has turned yellow.

I'm not sure what you mean by 'code' in this sentence. Is it health code? QR code? you could give more details.

We were very happy a lot because we canould have classes in bed.

It was very comfortable.

I was distracted in class.

Suddenly the teacher called my name, but I can't answer the teacher's question. so I felt ashamed.

You could make the sentence more personal e.g "suddenly my teacher called my name, but I can't answer the his/her question so I felt ashamed."

上网课


上网课Taking an Online Class

November 30, 2022


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In the morning.


In the morning, I was taking....

Merge this with the next sentence.

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In the morning.

This is a sentence fragment so I deleted it and appended it to the next sentence.

I was taking an online course in English.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I was takingtook an online course in English.

I was takingtook an online course in English.

In the morning I was taking an online course in English.

The reason for online classes is that Our teacher's code has turnd yellow.


The reason for online classes iwas that Oour teacher's code hasd turned yellow.

The reason for the online classes iwas that Oour teacher's code has turned yellow.

I'm not sure what you mean by 'code' in this sentence. Is it health code? QR code? you could give more details.

The reason for online classes is that Oour teacher's code hasd turned yellow.

The reason for online classes is that Oour teacher's code has turned yellow.

We were happy a lot because we can have classes in bed.


We were very happy a lot because we canould have classes in bed.

We were very happy a lot because we can have classes inould attend class from our beds.

We were very happy a lot because we can haveould attend classes in bed.

We were very happy a lot because we canould have classes in bed.

"could" is past tense for "can."

It was very comfortable.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I was distracted in class.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I was distracted during class.

Suddenly the teacher called my name, but I can't answer the teacher's question.I felt ashamed.


Suddenly the teacher called my name, but I can't answer the teacher's question. so I felt ashamed.

You could make the sentence more personal e.g "suddenly my teacher called my name, but I can't answer the his/her question so I felt ashamed."

Suddenly the teacher called my name, but I caouldn't answer the teacher's question., so I felt ashamed.

Suddenly the teacher called my name, but I caouldn't answer the teacher's question.I felt ashamed.

Suddenly tThe teacher suddenly called my name, but I caouldn't answer the teacher's question. I felt ashamed.

中文:在上午,我们上课英语线上课,线上课的原因是因为我们老师的码变成黄码了,我们很开心因为我们可以在床上上课,它非常的舒服,我在上课是分了神,突然老师点了我的名字,我不能够回答老师的问题,我感到很惭愧。


中文:在上午,我们上课英语线上课,线上课的原因是因为我们老师的码变成黄码了,我们很开心因为我们可以在床上上课,它非常的舒服,我在上课分了神,突然老师点了我的名字,我不能够回答老师的问题,我感到很惭愧。

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