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Toluwani

Sept. 6, 2025

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一年了

‎我去年8月22日加入了这个平台。我还记得我修改的第一篇英语文章。文章的总结跟《我的阿勒泰》有关。写文章的人在这儿也是我第一个朋友。我来之前有些时候会用中文写我的日记。但是没坚持,也有点儿无聊。后来问了ChatGPT,写中文的平台(跟很多人一样)。我在这儿学了很东西,不但跟中文有关,还有英语和别的。


I joined this platform on August 22 last year. I still remember the first English essay I corrected—it was a summary related to My Altay. The person who wrote that essay also became my first friend here. Before I came, I sometimes wrote my diary in Chinese, but I didn’t keep it up and found it a bit boring. Later, like many others, I asked ChatGPT about platforms for writing in Chinese. I’ve learned a lot here, not only about Chinese, but also about English and other things.

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一年了

‎我去年8月22日加入了这个平台。

我还记得我修改的第一篇英语文章。

文章的总结跟《我的阿勒泰》有关。

写文章的人在这儿也是我第一个朋友。

我来之前有些时候会用中文写我的日记。

但是没坚持,也有点儿无聊。

后来问了ChatGPT,写中文的平台(跟很多人一样)。

我在这儿学了很东西,不但跟中文有关,还有英语和别的。

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中文很好。

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Toluwani

Sept. 8, 2025

36

谢谢您。

‎我去年8月22日加入了这个平台。

我还记得我修改的第一篇英语文章。

文章的总结跟《我的阿勒泰》有关。

写文章的人在这儿也是我第一个朋友。

我来之前有些时候会用中文写我的日记。

但是没坚持,也有点儿无聊。

后来问了我向ChatGPT,写中文询问了中文写作的平台(跟很多人一样)。

我在这儿学了很东西,不但跟中文有关,还有英语和别的。

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Toluwani

Sept. 8, 2025

36

谢谢您。

一年了


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我还记得我修改的第一篇英语文章。


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文章的总结跟《我的阿勒泰》有关。


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写文章的人在这儿也是我第一个朋友。


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我来之前有些时候会用中文写我的日记。


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但是没坚持,也有点儿无聊。


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后来问了ChatGPT,写中文的平台(跟很多人一样)。


后来问了我向ChatGPT,写中文询问了中文写作的平台(跟很多人一样)。

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我在这儿学了很东西,不但跟中文有关,还有英语和别的。


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我在这儿学了很东西,不但跟中文有关,还有英语和别的。

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