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Toluwani

Sept. 20, 2025

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一只小鸡🐣

‎今天我们杀了一只小鸡。它这些日子不太积极。然而它的眼睛有伤。而且今天半夜下雨了,它们住的地方挺冷的。我们看到这只小鸡的时候,它一直在睡觉。我妈说如果一只鸡一直在睡觉,很有可能它很快会死了。昨天另一只鸡死了。她不想这只小鸡死了,所以我们杀了它。


Today we killed a chick. In recent days it hadn’t been very active, and its eye was injured. Also, it rained at midnight, and the place where they live was quite cold. When we saw this chick, it was sleeping the whole time. My mom said that if a chick keeps sleeping like that, it’s very likely it will die soon. Yesterday another chick had already died. She didn’t want this one to die on its own, so we killed it.

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一只小鸡🐣

‎今天我们杀了一只小鸡。

它这些日子不太积极有精神

它的眼睛有伤。

而且今天半夜下雨了,它们住的地方挺冷的。

我们看到这只小鸡的时候,它一直在睡觉。

我妈说如果一只鸡一直在睡觉,很有可能它很快会死了。

昨天另一只鸡死了。

她不想这只小鸡死了,所以我们杀了它。

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Toluwani

Sept. 25, 2025

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谢谢您。

昨天另一只鸡死了。


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她不想这只小鸡死了,所以我们杀了它。


她不想这只小鸡死了,所以我们杀了它。

一只小鸡🐣


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‎今天我们杀了一只小鸡。


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它这些日子不太积极。


它这些日子不太积极有精神

然而它的眼睛有伤。


它的眼睛有伤。

而且今天半夜下雨了,它们住的地方挺冷的。


而且今天半夜下雨了,它们住的地方挺冷的。

我们看到这只小鸡的时候,它一直在睡觉。


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我妈说如果一只鸡一直在睡觉,很有可能它很快会死了。


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