Dec. 28, 2024
また友達
昨日、他の友人が来ました。友達は妹も連れてきました。私は彼女が生まれた時から知っています。可愛くて良い子です。今はもう16歳になりました。今回、午前12時半までにゲームをやっていました。結局、投稿を書けませんでした。
Friends Again
Yesterday, my other friend came. She brought her sister with her. I've known her since she was first born. She's a cute and nice kid. She's already 16 now. This time, we played games until 12:30am. In the end, I could not write an entry.
また友達
昨日、他の友人が来ました。
友達は妹も連れてきました。
私は彼女が生まれた時から知っています。
可愛くて良い子です。
今はもう16歳になりました。
今回、午前12時半までにゲームをやっていました。
If it is midnight, "（夜中の）午前0時半" sounds appropriate.
結局、投稿を書けませんでした。
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This entry is almost perfectly written.
Dec. 28, 2024
Thank you very much!
Dec. 28, 2024
You're welcome.
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今回、午前12時半までにゲームをやっていました。 今回、午前12時半まで 今回、午前12時半まで までに というのは条件を表す言葉です😊 今回、午前12時半まで If it is midnight, "（夜中の）午前0時半" sounds appropriate. |
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