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June 30, 2022

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Winged, woolly and oily. (last part 3)

...And what happened at home!
The mouse started to cook the soup and nothing worked. Whatever she put in, the soup was still bad and not oily. She thought: "How was the pancake cooking the soup? He was jumping in a pot and back out so the soup was becoming oily." The mouse jumped in the pot and she immediately got burnt. She hardly got out. The pot dropped on the floor and the soup spilled (or spilt?). A mouse tail was tremble and her wool started to fall out. She sat on a bench and began to cry.
Meanwhile, the sparrow was carrying wood. He tried to chop wood with his beak, but only small wood chip were obtained. Then he broke his beak. He sat on the ground and also began to cry.
The pancake came run home. He saw that the sparrow cried and his beak was break. The pancake went into the house and saw that the mouse cried too and her wool fell out. The mouse and the sparrow saw that the pancake was half eaten so they cried harder. The pancake said: "That's what's going on when someone doesn't want to do his work." The sparrow felt ashamed and he moved under the bench. There was nothing to do, they cried and mourned, then they began to live the old way - the sparrow brings food, the pancake cooks porridge and soup, the mouse chop wood.

Corrections

Whatever she put in, tThe soup was still bad and not oily. no matter what she put in.

The pot dropped on the floor and the soup spilled (or spilt?)t.

both are correct

AHer mouse tail was tremble and her wool started to fall out.

He tried to chop wood with his beak, but only small wood chips were obtained.

He saw that the sparrow cried and his beak was breakoken.

The pancake went into the house and saw that the mouse criedying too, and that her wool had feallen out.

The pancake said: "That's what's going on happens when someone doesn't want to do his work."

There was nothing to do, they cried and mourned, then they began to live the old way - the sparrow brings food, the pancake cooks porridge and soup, the mouse chops wood.

Winged, woolly and oily. (last part 3)

...And what happened at home!

The mouse started to cook the soup and nothing worked.

Whatever she put in, the soup was still bad and not oily.

Whatever she put in, tThe soup was still bad and not oily. no matter what she put in.

She thought: "How was the pancake cooking the soup?

He was jumping in a pot and back out so the soup was becoming oily."

The mouse jumped in the pot and she immediately got burnt.

She hardly got out.

The pot dropped on the floor and the soup spilled (or spilt?).

The pot dropped on the floor and the soup spilled (or spilt?)t.

A mouse tail was tremble and her wool started to fall out.

AHer mouse tail was tremble and her wool started to fall out.

She sat on a bench and began to cry.

Meanwhile, the sparrow was carrying wood.

He tried to chop wood with his beak, but only small wood chip were obtained.

He tried to chop wood with his beak, but only small wood chips were obtained.

Then he broke his beak.

He sat on the ground and also began to cry.

The pancake came run home.

He saw that the sparrow cried and his beak was break.

He saw that the sparrow cried and his beak was breakoken.

The pancake went into the house and saw that the mouse cried too and her wool fell out.

The pancake went into the house and saw that the mouse criedying too, and that her wool had feallen out.

The mouse and the sparrow saw that the pancake was half eaten so they cried harder.

The pancake said: "That's what's going on when someone doesn't want to do his work."

The pancake said: "That's what's going on happens when someone doesn't want to do his work."

The sparrow felt ashamed and he moved under the bench.

There was nothing to do, they cried and mourned, then they began to live the old way - the sparrow brings food, the pancake cooks porridge and soup, the mouse chop wood.

There was nothing to do, they cried and mourned, then they began to live the old way - the sparrow brings food, the pancake cooks porridge and soup, the mouse chops wood.

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