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sending a text over a phone call

Technology has made it easier for humans to reach out to each other. Some individuals prefer to talk over the phone while others prefer to connect through text messages. Which type of communication do you prefer and why?

In this contemporary world, technology is essential to stay in contact with others. Using devices, people have various ways of conversation, such as by phone call or by message. From my perspective, I agree with the statement. I think sending a text better rather than a phone call because dropping a note doesn’t interrupt people's tasks, and it is useful to pass on relevant information.

First, the conversation is necessary between humans. During daily life, there are stressful moments where it is difficult to claim the call-up, like during a meeting, medical procedure, or class. So, a note is the best option. For instance, I am a physical therapist that provides the at-home treatment. When I start a procedure, I focus on each symptom to apply the technique and heal the damage. For this reason, I denied answering the call-up. Moreover, if a person needs treatment, the doctor sends a note. Consequently, when I have a free chance, I check and answer all the notices. Therefore, I suggest that sending a notice is an efficient way to connect with someone without interrupting their projects.

Second, sending a note is useful. It helps to inform about a crucial condition, such as an invitation to graduation, an accident, or only chat. For example, for my job, I sent a note to each of my cases to learn how they feel about their illness and if they have any questions related to the exercises. Moreover, when pain increase I interrupt the exercise, until the next treatment. As a result, delivering essential details in the text is efficient and simple. Thus I advise that sending a text is helpful to understand everything.

In essence, I strongly agree that sending a note is a stronger plan to maintain in touch rather than dial a call. This is because of two reasons: one is entry a note doesn’t alter humans’ actions and other text can share relevant news.

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Technology has made it easier for humans to reach out to each other.

Some individuals prefer to talk over the phone while others prefer to connect through text messages.

Which type of communication do you prefer and why?

In this contemporary world, technology is essential to stay in contact with others.

Using devices, people have various ways of conversationDevices let us communicate in a variety of ways, such as by phone call or by message.

From my perspective, I agree with the statementtexting is better than a phone call.

Or: I think that texting is better than a phone call.

I think sending a text is better rather thanthan making a phone call because dropping a note doesn’t interrupt people's tasks, and it is useful to pass on relevant information.

First, the conversation is necessary between humansly, people need to communicate with one another.

I rephrased this copula sentence as an active sentence to make it flow better. If you would like to keep the original sentence with 'is', I would suggest:

"Firstly, communication is a must for people."

During daily life, there are stressful moments where it is difficult to claim theanswer call-ups, like during a meeting, medical procedure, or class.

So, a note is the best option.

Could also use: 'a text' or 'a text message'

For instance, I am a physical therapist that provides the at-home treatment.

When I start a procedure, I focus on each symptom to apply the technique and heal the damage.

For this reason, I deniedo not answering the call-ups.

Moreover, if a person needs treatment, the doctor sends a note.

Consequently, when I have a free chancethe opportunity, I check and answer all the noticmessages.

Therefore, I suggest that sending a notice is an efficient way to connect with someone without interrupting their projects.

Secondly, sending a note is useful.

It helps toconvey information about a crucial conditionboth important events, such as an invitation to graduation, an accident, or onlyemergencies, such as an accident, and it can also be used to chat.

For example, for my job, I sent a note to each of my casepatients to learn how they feel about their illness and if they have any questions related to the exercises.

Moreover, when painI find out the pain has increased, I interruput the exercise, on hold until the next treatment.

As a resultClearly, delivering essential details in theby text is efficient and simple.

Thus, I advisewould say that sending a text is helpful to understand everythingenough to convey everything that is necessary.

In essence, I strongly agree that sending a note is a stronger plan to maintain in touch rather than dialbetter way to stay in touch than making a call.

This is because of two reasons: one is entry athat texting is note doesn’t alter humans’ actionsisruptive and the other is that text can share relevant newsconvey news just as well as a call can.

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eliandy

July 1, 2021

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sending a text over a phone call

Technology has made it easier for humans to reach out to each other.

Some individuals prefer to talk over the phone while others prefer to connect through text messages.

Which type of communication do you prefer and why?

In this contemporary world, technology is essential to stay in contact with others.

Using devices, people have various ways of conversation, such as by phone call or by message.

Using devices, people have various ways of conversationDevices let us communicate in a variety of ways, such as by phone call or by message.

From my perspective, I agree with the statement.

From my perspective, I agree with the statementtexting is better than a phone call.

I think sending a text better rather than a phone call because dropping a note doesn’t interrupt people's tasks, and it is useful to pass on relevant information.

I think sending a text is better rather thanthan making a phone call because dropping a note doesn’t interrupt people's tasks, and it is useful to pass on relevant information.

First, the conversation is necessary between humans.

First, the conversation is necessary between humansly, people need to communicate with one another.

During daily life, there are stressful moments where it is difficult to claim the call-up, like during a meeting, medical procedure, or class.

During daily life, there are stressful moments where it is difficult to claim theanswer call-ups, like during a meeting, medical procedure, or class.

So, a note is the best option.

So, a note is the best option.

For instance, I am a physical therapist that provides the at-home treatment.

For instance, I am a physical therapist that provides the at-home treatment.

When I start a procedure, I focus on each symptom to apply the technique and heal the damage.

For this reason, I denied answering the call-up.

For this reason, I deniedo not answering the call-ups.

Moreover, if a person needs treatment, the doctor sends a note.

Consequently, when I have a free chance, I check and answer all the notices.

Consequently, when I have a free chancethe opportunity, I check and answer all the noticmessages.

Therefore, I suggest that sending a notice is an efficient way to connect with someone without interrupting their projects.

Second, sending a note is useful.

Secondly, sending a note is useful.

It helps to inform about a crucial condition, such as an invitation to graduation, an accident, or only chat.

It helps toconvey information about a crucial conditionboth important events, such as an invitation to graduation, an accident, or onlyemergencies, such as an accident, and it can also be used to chat.

For example, for my job, I sent a note to each of my cases to learn how they feel about their illness and if they have any questions related to the exercises.

For example, for my job, I sent a note to each of my casepatients to learn how they feel about their illness and if they have any questions related to the exercises.

Moreover, when pain increase I interrupt the exercise, until the next treatment.

Moreover, when painI find out the pain has increased, I interruput the exercise, on hold until the next treatment.

As a result, delivering essential details in the text is efficient and simple.

As a resultClearly, delivering essential details in theby text is efficient and simple.

Thus I advise that sending a text is helpful to understand everything.

Thus, I advisewould say that sending a text is helpful to understand everythingenough to convey everything that is necessary.

In essence, I strongly agree that sending a note is a stronger plan to maintain in touch rather than dial a call.

In essence, I strongly agree that sending a note is a stronger plan to maintain in touch rather than dialbetter way to stay in touch than making a call.

This is because of two reasons: one is entry a note doesn’t alter humans’ actions and other text can share relevant news.

This is because of two reasons: one is entry athat texting is note doesn’t alter humans’ actionsisruptive and the other is that text can share relevant newsconvey news just as well as a call can.

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