Nov. 24, 2021
November 24th, 2021
It suddenly became cold from yesterday. It was as cold as midwinter today. It doesn't snow in Osaka where I live, but the snow piled up a lot in Hokkaido.
<p>昨日から急に寒くなりました。今日は真冬並みの寒さでした。私が住んでいる大阪は雪が降りませんが、北海道では雪がかなり積もったみたいです</p>
It suddenly became cold from, yesterday.
It was as cold as midwinter today.
It doesn't snow in Osaka where I live, but the snow piled up a lot in Hokkaido.
Nov. 25, 2021
Thank you!
November 24th, 2021
It suddenly became cold from yesterday.
It suddenly became cold compared to yesterday
This is what would more commonly be said in English
It was as cold as midwinter today.
It doesn't snow in Osaka where I live, but the snow piled up a lot in Hokkaido.
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Great writing, easily understood and excellent second and third sentences
Nov. 24, 2021
Thank you!
It doesn't snow in Osaka where I live, but the snow piled up a lot in Hokkaido.
Or "but a lot of snow piled up in Hokkaido."
Feb. 4, 2022
Thank you!
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November 24th, 2021 |
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It suddenly became cold from yesterday. It suddenly became cold It suddenly became cold from yesterday. It suddenly became cold compared to yesterday
This is what would more commonly be said in English |
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It was as cold as midwinter today. |
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It doesn't snow in Osaka where I live, but the snow piled up a lot in Hokkaido. It doesn't snow in Osaka where I live, but the snow piled up a lot in Hokkaido. Or "but a lot of snow piled up in Hokkaido."
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