The name is castle Moritzburg. The name is castle Moritzburg.

Sieht sehr schön aus!

I Llost Ttrack during this Sstory... I lost track during this story...

I think during works better. Also you wouldn't capitalise the words if it's just a normal sentence as far as I know!

Yesterday I and, some friends and I decided to go to the local ice hockey game. Yesterday, some friends and I decided to go to the local ice hockey game.

Unfortunately, we couldn't book the tickets, because there weren't any of them left. Unfortunately, we couldn't book the tickets, because there weren't any of them left.

Unfortunately, we couldn't book tickets because there weren't any left. Slightly simplified.

Earlier today a friend of mine called me to share thislet me know. Earlier today a friend of mine called me to let me know.

Never have I been this angry in my entire life beforein my entire life have I been so angry. Never in my entire life have I been so angry.

I've ( or - I had) never been so angry in my entire life. - sounds better.

I am not really sure if theI used the right tense ofin the previouslast sentence has been used correctly. I am not really sure if I used the right tense in the last sentence.

Neither I am ofSame goes for this one. Same goes for this one.

getting very 'meta' haha.

All I can say in this matter is that I am happy to be able to write this and receive a correction. All I can say is that I am happy to be able to write this and receive a correction.

'in this matter' is a bit strange here.

With the corrections, It iit's possible for me to revise it afterwards and in the best case, If all goes wiell even- learn from ithem. With corrections, it's possible for me to revise afterwards and if all goes well - learn from them.

After my little excursion to another topic, I will go onHowever, let's continue with my story. However, let's continue with my story.

a little excursion is called a 'tangent' and you would say- 'However, I'm going off on a tangent and need to get back on topic.'

The last thing that has happened was that I have beenAnyway, I was shouting at my friend because of my enraged temper. Anyway, I was shouting at my friend because of my enraged temper.

because of my rage.

(Well as you guys probablymight have already knewguessed, that was / this is a lie.) (Well as you guys might have already guessed, that was / this is a lie.)

If you want to break the fourth wall put brackets around 'what you are saying to the audience'. Very Shakespearian!

I wasn't angry, but I wanted to use certain tenses. I wasn't angry, but I wanted to use certain tenses.

I wanted to use a certain tense. since it was one sentence.

We have made the plan to see the Eislöwen the next time we're able to get tickets for the game. We have made the plan to see the Eislöwen the next time we're able to get tickets.

'a plan to see the ice lions' 'for the game' is understood by 'getting tickets.'

Some friends have told me, that they are pretty good in their league. Some friends told me that they are pretty good in their league.

Slightly simplified but your original sentence works too. The comma isn't necessary.

Well, they haven't seen me on the ice with my ice skates in a long time either, as. I would give the players on the team a worthy opponent! Well, they haven't seen me on the ice with my ice skates. I would give the players on the team a worthy opponent!

'I bet I would be a worthy match for the players.' 'I bet I could give some of the players a run for their money.'

When I grew up, I waswas growing up, I (regularly) playinged ice hockey on the lakes in my village. When I was growing up, I (regularly) played ice hockey on the lakes in my village.

really nice scenery as in the backgroundIt was very scenic, as there was also a famous castle nearby. It was very scenic, as there was a famous castle nearby.

Simplified.

The castle still exists but most of the lakes around it mostly aren't having an ice cover on them which ishave frozen over with ice thick enough to stand on it. The castle still exists but most of the lakes around it have frozen over with ice thick enough to stand on.

If you want to confirm this statement you can check it out by searching for it on Google. If you want to confirm this statement you can check it out by searching for it on Google.

I would just write - 'If you want to see what I mean, you can find it on google.'

After I have looked at the start ofLooking back over theis story, I'm wondering why I keep losing the track of it and instead write something elserack and going off on a tangent. Looking back over this story, I'm wondering why I keep losing track and going off on a tangent.

In the German Language, there is thisa saying which can beis probably transferred toapplicable: to have lost the red yarn of the story. In the German Language, there is a saying which is probably applicable: to have lost the red yarn of the story.

Is there something in English as well which I could use instead? Is there something in English as well which I could use instead?

To have gone off on a tangent.