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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? To improve the quality of education, universities should spend more money on payrolls for school tutors. Use specific reasons and examples.

Most Universities want to maintain or boost the education status to attack new freshmen. There are various alternatives, such as building up each lecturer's proficiency or promoting searching between juniors and educators. From my perspective, I disagree with the statement. I think it is more proper to enhance the course grade of all schoolteachers rather than give greater pays to raise the schooling standard because investing in a teaching program to merge their qualification and supporting learners in external matches to get updated info.

First, when all employees should attend to learn classes, their background turns to change and positively affects their juniors. Having a deeper perception of the subject motivates each student to understand. For instance, my history professor explained how to use a timeline to study. Moreover, I notice practicing to learn several essential ancient acts and I got significant results. Consequently, my classmates and I apply this same technique in distinctive themes, and the studying quality of the learners is stronger. Therefore, I suggest institutions should establish expanding the intelligence of their workers to build up the whole scholar's achievement.

Second, when juniors take part in a national contest, this develops their study process. Searching is necessary to have a complete overview of the topics. For example, my daughter performed at the United Nations competition in their city. Therefore, the team spends several hours learning about the political, social, and cultural problems of significant cities around the world. As a result, they identify the best solution to their challenges. They won all the prizes, and the Academy received famous recognition for the president. Thus, I advise that supporting students to take part in tournaments outside of campus benefits children's learning.

In essence, I strongly disagree with spending higher salaries to increase the study level in an institution. This is because of two reasons: one is a regular educator coach program to develop their students’ intelligence and the other is taking part in foreign competitions to expand updated knowledge between scholars.

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eEducation lLevel

In English, the first letter of all nouns, verbs, adjetives, adverbs, etc., is capitalized in the title.

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

To improve the quality of education, universities should spend more money on payrolls for school tutors.

Use specific reasons and examples.

Most Uuniversities want to maintain or boost their education status to attrackt new freshmen.

"Attack" = atacar
"Attract" = atraer

There are various alternatives to the solution mentioned above, such as building up each lecturer's proficiency or promoting searchingconnections between juniors and educators.

I wasn't entirely sure what you meant by "searching".

From my perspective, I disagree with the statement.

You should really start of the paragraph this way, as a strong introduction and a central thesis. Moreover, if you were going to use "from my perspective", you should really add it at the end and be prepared to follow it up with additional information, such as "I disagree with this statement because from my perspective...".

I think it is more proper to enhance the course grade of all schoolteachers' courses rather than give greater payspaying more to raise the schooling standard, because investing in a teaching program to merge their qualification and supporting learners in external matches to getallows them to be more qualified and at the same time supporting learners, who receive updated info.

"It is" is often said/written as "It's".
I had a little trouble with this sentence, but I tried my best.

First of all, when all employees should attend to learnattend improvement classes, their background turns to changeknowledge grows and positively affects their juniorstudents.

This was a little confusing because I'm not sure if you're using "juniors" such as college juniors or junior colleagues.

Having a deeper perceptionunderstanding of the subject motivates each student to understandlearn.

For instance, my history professor explained how to use a timeline to study.

Moreover, I notice practicing to learnd that by using it to practice several essential ancient acts and I got significant results.

I don't know what you mean by "several essential ancient acts".

Consequently, my classmates and I apply this same technique in distinctive themefferent subjects, and the studying quality of the learners is strongour studying is better.

Distinct isn't really the same as "distinto" in Spanish. To me it has a different connotation/usage.

Therefore, I suggest that institutions should establish expanding the intelligence of their workers to build up the whole scholar's achievementir employees' understandings of their subject matters as the way to build up their prestige as a whole.

Second, when juniorstudents take part in a national contests, this develops their study processeir studying methods develop.

SResearching is necessary to have a complete overviewunderstanding of thea topics.

For example, my daughter performcompeted at thea United Nations competition in their city.

Therefore, theHer team spendst several hours learning about the political, social, and cultural problems of significantmajor cities around the world.

As a result, they identifyied the best solution to their challenges.

They won all the prizes, and the Academy receiv's president gained famouse and recognition for the president.

Thus, I advise that supportwould say that encouraging students to take part in tournaments outside of campus benefits children's learning.

In essence, I strongly disagree with spendpaying higher salaries to increase the study levelamount of studying taking place in an institution.

This is because of two reasons: one is athat regular educator coach program to developmployee qualification classes help encourage their students’ intelligence to study, and the other is that taking part in foreign competitions to expand updated knowledge between scholarshelps scholars gain new knowledge.

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Most Universities want to maintain or boost the education status to attack new freshmen.

Most Uuniversities want to maintain or boost their education status to attrackt new freshmen.

education level

eEducation lLevel

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

To improve the quality of education, universities should spend more money on payrolls for school tutors.

To improve the quality of education, universities should spend more money on payrolls for school tutors.

Use specific reasons and examples.

There are various alternatives, such as building up each lecturer's proficiency or promoting searching between juniors and educators.

There are various alternatives to the solution mentioned above, such as building up each lecturer's proficiency or promoting searchingconnections between juniors and educators.

From my perspective, I disagree with the statement.

From my perspective, I disagree with the statement.

I think it is more proper to enhance the course grade of all schoolteachers rather than give greater pays to raise the schooling standard because investing in a teaching program to merge their qualification and supporting learners in external matches to get updated info.

I think it is more proper to enhance the course grade of all schoolteachers' courses rather than give greater payspaying more to raise the schooling standard, because investing in a teaching program to merge their qualification and supporting learners in external matches to getallows them to be more qualified and at the same time supporting learners, who receive updated info.

First, when all employees should attend to learn classes, their background turns to change and positively affects their juniors.

First of all, when all employees should attend to learnattend improvement classes, their background turns to changeknowledge grows and positively affects their juniorstudents.

Having a deeper perception of the subject motivates each student to understand.

Having a deeper perceptionunderstanding of the subject motivates each student to understandlearn.

For instance, my history professor explained how to use a timeline to study.

Moreover, I notice practicing to learn several essential ancient acts and I got significant results.

Moreover, I notice practicing to learnd that by using it to practice several essential ancient acts and I got significant results.

Consequently, my classmates and I apply this same technique in distinctive themes, and the studying quality of the learners is stronger.

Consequently, my classmates and I apply this same technique in distinctive themefferent subjects, and the studying quality of the learners is strongour studying is better.

Therefore, I suggest institutions should establish expanding the intelligence of their workers to build up the whole scholar's achievement.

Therefore, I suggest that institutions should establish expanding the intelligence of their workers to build up the whole scholar's achievementir employees' understandings of their subject matters as the way to build up their prestige as a whole.

Second, when juniors take part in a national contest, this develops their study process.

Second, when juniorstudents take part in a national contests, this develops their study processeir studying methods develop.

Searching is necessary to have a complete overview of the topics.

SResearching is necessary to have a complete overviewunderstanding of thea topics.

For example, my daughter performed at the United Nations competition in their city.

For example, my daughter performcompeted at thea United Nations competition in their city.

Therefore, the team spends several hours learning about the political, social, and cultural problems of significant cities around the world.

Therefore, theHer team spendst several hours learning about the political, social, and cultural problems of significantmajor cities around the world.

As a result, they identify the best solution to their challenges.

As a result, they identifyied the best solution to their challenges.

They won all the prizes, and the Academy received famous recognition for the president.

They won all the prizes, and the Academy receiv's president gained famouse and recognition for the president.

Thus, I advise that supporting students to take part in tournaments outside of campus benefits children's learning.

Thus, I advise that supportwould say that encouraging students to take part in tournaments outside of campus benefits children's learning.

In essence, I strongly disagree with spending higher salaries to increase the study level in an institution.

In essence, I strongly disagree with spendpaying higher salaries to increase the study levelamount of studying taking place in an institution.

This is because of two reasons: one is a regular educator coach program to develop their students’ intelligence and the other is taking part in foreign competitions to expand updated knowledge between scholars.

This is because of two reasons: one is athat regular educator coach program to developmployee qualification classes help encourage their students’ intelligence to study, and the other is that taking part in foreign competitions to expand updated knowledge between scholarshelps scholars gain new knowledge.

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