June 10, 2021
Education is more challenging
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Educating Children is a more arduous task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cellphone, social networking, website. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In the contemporary world, education can be more challenging than in the latest. This is because of the significant amount of external influences on technology. It is pretty common that infants play their games on their fathers’ phones or on any other device. This develops their connection with internet websites at an early age. From my perspective, I agree with the statement. Actually, I think kids’ education it is more demanding because of the regular contact with social network rather than in the old times because the constant exposure can alter their conduct and exposed them to problems.
First, Life is demanding, and more with all stress and the covid pandemic. We learn to do everything from home, so this improves the use of all kinds of accessories. The tough part is kids are not enough mature to analyze if the game or site is secure. Many of these sites display colorful images to attack them. For instance, my nephew since last year took most of his classes online, he learned to watch some broadcasts on a site. Moreover, most of those videos contain aggressive action and inadequate language, so he behaved in the same line at home. Consequently, my sister discovered this, so she blocked the entry to all those pages, and punished him. Therefore, I suggest that mothers need to check the entry of all those website's devices, to protect them from any information that could disturb them.
Second, accessing different sites or social pages can be a great tool to continue in touch with the outside life and to increase the profits of a company. In adolescents it does not work equally, they can suffer a tremendous variety of headaches. For example, my relative with only 14 years old, accepted the request of a stranger handsome boy. He delivered messages to her and requested some pictures without clothes. She sent nothing, so he said he will kidnap her. Therefore, she told her fathers, and with the help of the police, they find a kidnapper man. As a result, she learns to not accept an outside and her parents block some of her connections. Thus, i advise parents should teach their youths the enormous issues that exist using the internet and the best manner to prevent this position.
In essence, I strongly agree that education is more demanding now rather than at the latest because of the connection to social networks and sites. This is because of two reasons: one it promotes changes in their conduct and other it suffers difficult complications.
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Educating Children is a more arduous task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on celltheir phones, on social networking, websitmedia, or online.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In the contemporary world, education can be more challenging than in the latest.
In contemporary times, education can be more challenging than in the past.
This is because of thea significant amount of external influences on technology.technological influence.
It is prettyquite common thatfor infants to play their games on their fathers’ phones or on any other devices.
The change from "pretty" to "quite" is a stylistic change. "Pretty" is more common in casual or conversational talk/writing, so it depends. You can use it, but from the topic, I feel like "quite" would fit nicely here (especially in writing).
This develops their connection with the internet websites at an early age.
From my perspective, I agree with theis statement.
Actually, I think kids’I think children's education it is more demanding because of the regular contact with social network rather than in the old times because the constant exposure can alter their conductnow more than ever due to an increased usage of social media in that constant exposure impacts their behavior and exposeds them to more problems.
You can also put "now more than ever" at the beginning. "Now more than ever, I think...."
The tough part is kids are not enough mature to analyzemature enough to know if thea game or a website is securafe.
For instance, my nephew since last year took most of his classes online, he learned to watch some broadcasts on a site.
For instance, this last year my nephew took most of his classes online and he learned to watch shows online.
Moreover, most of thoese videos contained aggressive action and inadequatcoarse language, so he started to behaved in the same lineway at home.
Consequently,When my sister discovered this, so she blocked the entry to all those pages, and punished him.
Therefore, I suggest that mothers need to check the entry of all those website's devices, to protect them from any information that could disturb them.
Therefore, I suggest that mothers check the websites that their children access to protect them from disturbing content.
He deliveredsent her messages to her and requested some pictures without clothesasking her to send him pictures of herself naked.
SWhen sent nothing, so he said he willhe didn't send anything, he threatened to kidnap her.
Therefore, sShe told her fathers,parents and with the help of the police, they find a kidnapper mancaught him.
It is okay to use "fathers" if she has 2 dads who you are referring to.
As a result, she learns toed not accept an outside requests from strangers and her parents blocked some of her connectionaccess to sites.
Thuserefore, iI advise parents shouldto teach their youths the enormous issues that exist about the risks of using the internet and the best mannerethods to prevent this posiese kinds of situations.
In essenceconclusion, I strongly agree that education is more demanding now rather than at the latestthan before because of the connection to social networks and sites.
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June 15, 2021
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Education is more challenging |
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? |
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Educating Children is a more arduous task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cellphone, social networking, website. Educating Children is a more arduous task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on |
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Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. |
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In the contemporary world, education can be more challenging than in the latest. In the contemporary world, education can be more challenging than in the latest. In contemporary times, education can be more challenging than in the past.
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This is because of the significant amount of external influences on technology. This is because of |
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It is pretty common that infants play their games on their fathers’ phones or on any other device. It is The change from "pretty" to "quite" is a stylistic change. "Pretty" is more common in casual or conversational talk/writing, so it depends. You can use it, but from the topic, I feel like "quite" would fit nicely here (especially in writing).
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This develops their connection with internet websites at an early age. This develops their connection with the internet |
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From my perspective, I agree with the statement.
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Actually, I think kids’ education it is more demanding because of the regular contact with social network rather than in the old times because the constant exposure can alter their conduct and exposed them to problems.
You can also put "now more than ever" at the beginning. "Now more than ever, I think...."
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First, Life is demanding, and more with all stress and the covid pandemic. |
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We learn to do everything from home, so this improves the use of all kinds of accessories. |
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The tough part is kids are not enough mature to analyze if the game or site is secure. The tough part is kids are not |
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Many of these sites display colorful images to attack them. |
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For instance, my nephew since last year took most of his classes online, he learned to watch some broadcasts on a site. For instance, my nephew since last year took most of his classes online, he learned to watch some broadcasts on a site. For instance, this last year my nephew took most of his classes online and he learned to watch shows online.
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Moreover, most of those videos contain aggressive action and inadequate language, so he behaved in the same line at home. Mo |
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Consequently, my sister discovered this, so she blocked the entry to all those pages, and punished him.
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Therefore, I suggest that mothers need to check the entry of all those website's devices, to protect them from any information that could disturb them. Therefore, I suggest that mothers need to check the entry of all those website's devices, to protect them from any information that could disturb them. Therefore, I suggest that mothers check the websites that their children access to protect them from disturbing content.
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Second, accessing different sites or social pages can be a great tool to continue in touch with the outside life and to increase the profits of a company. |
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In adolescents it does not work equally, they can suffer a tremendous variety of headaches. |
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For example, my relative with only 14 years old, accepted the request of a stranger handsome boy. |
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He delivered messages to her and requested some pictures without clothes. He |
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She sent nothing, so he said he will kidnap her.
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Therefore, she told her fathers, and with the help of the police, they find a kidnapper man.
It is okay to use "fathers" if she has 2 dads who you are referring to.
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As a result, she learns to not accept an outside and her parents block some of her connections. As a result, she learn |
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Thus, i advise parents should teach their youths the enormous issues that exist using the internet and the best manner to prevent this position. Th |
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In essence, I strongly agree that education is more demanding now rather than at the latest because of the connection to social networks and sites. In |
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This is because of two reasons: one it promotes changes in their conduct and other it suffers difficult complications. |
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