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Brief description of three people (a sort of a story)

There are two people in the park. A man and woman. He is tall. How tall is he? He's taller than her. She is wearing a plaid skirt, it resembles a school uniform skirt. But one can tells that there's been a while since she didn't go a school. Both of them like to smoke. They were smoking when I realized that he had a purple, almost black, bruise in his left cheek. Every now and then she blows out the smoke to kiss his face, just on the bruise. When I come to the park it was a quarter past 10, now it's 11 o'clock. They probably know I'm looking at them with special interest. She probably thinks I'm a weirdo, but he doesn't. I'm sure, he doesn´t mind of me. He doesn´t have to, for if he has lived long enough in the neighborhood, he must know me and my customs; if not, he'll.

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There are two people in the park.

A man and a woman.

He is tall.

How tall is he?

He's taller than her.

She is wearing a plaid skirt,; it resembles a school uniform skirt.

Because both of these clauses are complete sentences, you either separate them with a semi-colon ( ; ) or you just make them two sentences.

But one can tells that ithere's been a while since she didn't go awent to school.

Both of them like to smoke.

They were smoking when I realized that he had a purple, almost black, bruise ion his left cheek.

Every now and then she blows out the smoke to kiss his face, just on the bruise.

When I coame to the park it was a quarter past 10, now it's 11 o'clock.

They probably know I'm looking at them with special interest.

She probably thinks I'm a weirdo, but he doesn't.

I'm sure, he doesn´t mind of me.

He doesn´t have to, for if he has lived long enough in the neighborhood, he must know me and my customs; if not, he'll.

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Brief description of three people (a sort of a story)

There are two people in the park.

A man and woman.

A man and a woman.

He is tall.

How tall is he?

He's taller than her.

She is wearing a plaid skirt, it resembles a school uniform skirt.

She is wearing a plaid skirt,; it resembles a school uniform skirt.

But one can tells that there's been a while since she didn't go a school.

But one can tells that ithere's been a while since she didn't go awent to school.

Both of them like to smoke.

They were smoking when I realized that he had a purple, almost black, bruise in his left cheek.

They were smoking when I realized that he had a purple, almost black, bruise ion his left cheek.

Every now and then she blows out the smoke to kiss his face, just on the bruise.

When I come to the park it was a quarter past 10, now it's 11 o'clock.

When I coame to the park it was a quarter past 10, now it's 11 o'clock.

They probably know I'm looking at them with special interest.

She probably thinks I'm a weirdo, but he doesn't.

I'm sure, he doesn´t mind of me.

I'm sure, he doesn´t mind of me.

He doesn´t have to, for if he has lived long enough in the neighborhood, he must know me and my customs; if not, he'll.

He doesn´t have to, for if he has lived long enough in the neighborhood, he must know me and my customs; if not, he'll.

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