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Jan. 28, 2023

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A letter to Value (2)

Glad to hear from you, Valya! I'm fine, thanks! How's it going recently?

Oh in China, grade 9 is in middle school! How interesting! I know you are learning art now. What kind of art are you learning, painting or dancing?

Because of the Covid-19 , I have left school for 2 month. So our exams are canceled, too. But we'll have them when we come back to school. We have classes on computers these days (although it's winter vacation now). Luckily, we'll come back to school in February.

It's warmer and warmer in Xi'an these days. But it's still cold at night. lol I wish your dream will come true in this year.

Have a good day~

I'm waiting for your reply ~

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A letter to Valueya (2)

Is this the name?

Glad to hear from you, Valya!

I'm fine, thanks!

How's it going recently?

Oh, in China, grade 9 is in middle school!

How interesting!

I know you are learning art now.

What kind of art are you learning, painting or dancing?

Because of the Covid-19 , I have left school for 2 months.

So our exams are canceled, too.

But we'll have them when we come back to school.

We have classes on computers these days (although it's winter vacation now).

Luckily, we'll come back to school in February.

It's warmer and warmer in Xi'an these days.,

I would continue with the next sentence as part of this one

Bbut it's still cold at night.

lol I wishhope your dream will come true in this year.

I'm not sure why "lol" is there, but it's probably missing context I don't know about.

Have a good day~

I'm waiting for your reply ~

What kind of art are you learning, painting or dancing?

I am a native speaker of english. Where I come from dancing is not usually considered a form of art the same way painting or drawing is. Art is usually associated with making something. I think you are technically correct but from my experiences they aren't connected when talking about daily life.

So our exams are cancelled, too.

lol I wish your dream will come true in this year.

A letter to Value (2)

A letter to Valueya (2)

Glad to hear from you, Valya!

I'm fine, thanks!

How's it going recently?

Oh in China, grade 9 is in middle school!

Oh, in China, grade 9 is in middle school!

How interesting!

I know you are learning art now.

What kind of art are you learning, painting or dancing?

What kind of art are you learning, painting or dancing?

Because of the Covid-19 , I have left school for 2 month.

Because of the Covid-19 , I have left school for 2 months.

So our exams are canceled, too.

So our exams are cancelled, too.

But we'll have them when we come back to school.

We have classes on computers these days (although it's winter vacation now).

Luckily, we'll come back to school in February.

It's warmer and warmer in Xi'an these days.

It's warmer and warmer in Xi'an these days.,

But it's still cold at night.

Bbut it's still cold at night.

lol I wish your dream will come true in this year.

lol I wishhope your dream will come true in this year.

lol I wish your dream will come true in this year.

Have a good day~

I'm waiting for your reply ~

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