February 2nd
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Tomorrow is the last day I go to school in Spain. It was a great experience that I learned both English and Spanish at the school.
明日は自分がスペインの学校に行く最後の日だ。この学校で英語とスペイン語を学べたことは、すごくいい経験だったと思う。
Tomorrow is themy last day I go toof school in Spain.
We use "my" and drop the "I got to school" here because it's your last day of school in Spain and that covers the "going" aspect.
It was a great experience thatbecause I learned both English and Spanish at the school.
"It was a great experience" is the result and "because" tells us why you had a great experience. Since you already mentioned "school" in the previous sentence, it can be optional to include it in this one.
Overall feedback
Great job! 英語とスペイン語、すごいですね。
- SsotaFeb 3
Thank you for correcting! スペイン語を勉強したことあるのに、スペイン語喋れないんです。haha
- MmariFeb 3
スペイン語も難しいと思います。よくわかりました!
Tomorrow is themy last day I go toof school in Spain.
It was a great experience that, because I learned both English and Spanish at the school.
- SsotaFeb 2
Thank you for correcting!
Tomorrow iswill be the last day that I go to school in Spain.
It washas been a great experience that I learned, learning both English and Spanish at the school.
- SsotaFeb 3
Thank you for correcting!
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