April 12, 2021
I have been married since 2014 but we have been meeting each other since 2002. We have an adorable 5-year-old son. I have 2 sisters, one older and one younger so I'm the middle one. We are as different as chalk and cheese with my older sister. Not just look like but personality too. She is short, I'm tall, she is blond I'm black. I have a solution to every problem, she has a problem to every solution. She is a mother type but I don't. I love learning she hates this. But we have a lot of common personalities with my younger sister and we get on well with each other. Even though there are 11 years between us. But our relationship didn't start well. I hated her because she birth. :D I know this is a bad trait but I was a teenager and I don't want a little sister. But now: I'm a big fan of her.
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I have been married since 2014 but we have been meeting each other sincestarted dating in 2002.
You could say "we have been" but that implies that you're still "only" dating. You're married now, so the "dating" has ended.
We have an adorable 5-year-old son.
I have 2 sisters, one older and one younger so I'm the middle one.
We are as different as chalk and cheese with my older sisterMy older sister and I are like chalk and cheese.
Nice phrase! Very idiomatic.
Not just in look likes but personality too.
She is short, I'm tall, she is blonde I'm blackrunette.
Blond/blonde comes from French, so if you're talking about a woman you need to add "e" on the end.
Brunette refers to dark hair generally, but we don't have a word for people with black hair specifically. You would have to say "I have black hair."
I have a solution to every problem, she has a problem to every solution.
She is a mother type but I don'am not.
I love learning and she hates this.it.
Saying "this" here would give the impression that she hates the fact that YOU learn. "it" shows she hates learning in general, not that you do it.
But we have a lot of common personalities with my younger sistermy younger sister and I have similar personalities and we get on well with each other.
Each person has one personality, your personality might have a lot of features or characteristics, so you could say "my sister and I have a lot of common characteristics."
Even though there are 11 years between us.
But our relationship didn't start well.
:D I know this is a bad traitadmission but I was a teenager and I doidn't want a little sister.
"Trait" is something ongoing, a personality trait/feature. I changed the meaning to "admission" i.e. something you don't want to say but you "admit" to it. It was your opinion then, but it has changed.
But now: I'm a big fan of hers.
her = objective
hers = belonging to her/ relating to her
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Some very nice comparisons and I was impressed with the "chalk and cheese" idiom. Well done!
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I have been married since 2014 but we have been meeting each other since 2002. I have been married since 2014 but we You could say "we have been" but that implies that you're still "only" dating. You're married now, so the "dating" has ended. |
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We have an adorable 5-year-old son. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I have 2 sisters, one older and one younger so I'm the middle one. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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We are as different as chalk and cheese with my older sister.
Nice phrase! Very idiomatic. |
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Not just look like but personality too. Not just in look |
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She is short, I'm tall, she is blond I'm black. She is short, I'm tall, she is blonde I'm b Blond/blonde comes from French, so if you're talking about a woman you need to add "e" on the end. Brunette refers to dark hair generally, but we don't have a word for people with black hair specifically. You would have to say "I have black hair." |
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I have a solution to every problem, she has a problem to every solution. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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She is a mother type but I don't. She is a mother type but I |
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I love learning she hates this. I love learning and she hates Saying "this" here would give the impression that she hates the fact that YOU learn. "it" shows she hates learning in general, not that you do it. |
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But we have a lot of common personalities with my younger sister and we get on well with each other. But Each person has one personality, your personality might have a lot of features or characteristics, so you could say "my sister and I have a lot of common characteristics." |
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Even though there are 11 years between us. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But our relationship didn't start well. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I hated her because she birth. |
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:D I know this is a bad trait but I was a teenager and I don't want a little sister. :D I know this is a bad "Trait" is something ongoing, a personality trait/feature. I changed the meaning to "admission" i.e. something you don't want to say but you "admit" to it. It was your opinion then, but it has changed. |
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But now: I'm a big fan of her. But now: I'm a big fan of hers. her = objective hers = belonging to her/ relating to her |
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