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Arcley

May 5, 2025

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Night out

You want me to live forever to be by your side, and I want to die tomorrow with all the things that are wrong with me.

You want me to live forever by your side but, I want to die tomorrow in your arms while I have you.

I don't think I can live forever. I wish I could vanish and have you in my memories for the eternity.


Você quer que eu viva pra sempre para estar ao seu lado, e eu quero morrer amanhã com todas as coisas que tem de errado comigo.

Você quer que eu viva para sempre ao seu lado, eu quero morrer amanhã enquanto tenho você em meus braços.

Eu não posso viver para sempre. Eu queria desaparecer e ter você em minhas memórias para toda eternidade.

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Night out

You want me to live forever to be by your side, and I want to die tomorrow with all the things that are wrong with me.

You want me to live forever by your side, but, I want to die tomorrow in your arms while I have you.

I don't think I can live forever.

I wish I could vanish and have you in my memories for the eternity.

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Are these song lyrics? They are very poetic

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Arcley

May 6, 2025

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Thanks, these are my words.

Night oOut

You want me to live foreverand to be by your side forever, and I want to die tomorrow with all the things that are wrong with me.

You want me to live forever by your side, but, I want to die tomorrow in your arms while I have you.

I don't think I can live forever.

I wish I could vanish and have you in my memories for the eternity.

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Mostly correct.

Night out


Night oOut

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You want me to live forever by your side but, I want to die tomorrow in your arms while I have you.


You want me to live forever by your side, but, I want to die tomorrow in your arms while I have you.

You want me to live forever by your side, but, I want to die tomorrow in your arms while I have you.

I don't think I can live forever.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I wish I could vanish and have you in my memories for the eternity.


I wish I could vanish and have you in my memories for the eternity.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

You want me to live forever to be by your side, and I want to die tomorrow with all the things that are wrong with me.


You want me to live foreverand to be by your side forever, and I want to die tomorrow with all the things that are wrong with me.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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