April 12, 2021
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The residential buildings I live in are located in the development zone of my city. There are fewer buildings and residents here. When I arrived here from downtown, I immediately felt the fresh air. The wind is also stronger here than downtown. I can often hear wind whistles. Besides, the community I live in has a low building density, so I never felt crowded and depressed when I stayed in it. Because there are fewer buildings here, I have a broad view. From my window, I can see a long distance. When I wake up at night, I can also see street lights from my window, and my room is not too dark because of those street lamps. I like living in an area with fewer buildings and people. If an area with density buildings and crowded people, It often makes me feel depressed and upset.
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The residential buildings I live in are located in the development zone of my city.
There are fewer buildings and residents here.
When I arrimoved here from downtown, I immediately felt the fresh air.
"Arrived" makes it sound like you just visited one day.
The wind is also stronger here than downtown.
I can often hear the wind whistles.
Besides, the community I live in has a low building density, so Iit never feelts crowded andor depressed when I stayed in it.
Weird thing here - spaces can be crowded, but individuals can't.
Because there are fewer buildings here, I have a broad vienice view out my window.
From my window, I can see a long distance.
When I wake up at night, I can also see street lights from my window, and my room is not too dark because of those street lampsthey keep my room from getting too dark.
Sounds more natural this way. Streetlight ≠ street lamp. Street lamps are old-fashioned and they use gas.
I like living in an area with fewer buildings and people.
If an area with densityhas buildings and crowded with people, Iit often makes me feel depressed and upset.
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Besides, the community I live in has a low building density, so Iit never feelts crowded andor depressed when I stayed in it.
Spaces can be crowded, individual can’t.
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When I wake up at night, I can also see street lights from my window, and my room is not too dark because of those street lampsthey keep my room from getting too dark.
They keep my room from getting too dark. I thought that streetlights equals street lamps before.
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If an area with densityhas buildings and crowded with people, Iit often makes me feel depressed and upset.
If an area has buildings crowded with people, it often makes me feel depressed and upset.
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Thank you very much.
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The residential buildings I live in are located in the development zone of my city. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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There are fewer buildings and residents here. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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When I arrived here from downtown, I immediately felt the fresh air. When I "Arrived" makes it sound like you just visited one day. |
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The wind is also stronger here than downtown. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I can often hear wind whistles. I can often hear the wind whistle |
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Besides, the community I live in has a low building density, so I never felt crowded and depressed when I stayed in it. Besides, the community I live in has a low building density, so Weird thing here - spaces can be crowded, but individuals can't. |
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Because there are fewer buildings here, I have a broad view. Because there are fewer buildings here, I have a |
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From my window, I can see a long distance. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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When I wake up at night, I can also see street lights from my window, and my room is not too dark because of those street lamps. When I wake up at night, I can also see street lights from my window, and Sounds more natural this way. Streetlight ≠ street lamp. Street lamps are old-fashioned and they use gas. |
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I like living in an area with fewer buildings and people. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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If an area with density buildings and crowded people, It often makes me feel depressed and upset. If an area |
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