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April 13, 2021

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I want to go to music festival

I love to listen to music, and I love EDM which is a kind of music. Why I love this kind of music, it makes me high tension whenever I am under the weather. I'm obsessed with it, so I bought a DJ set two years ago. And I went to a music festival where a lot of famous musicians performed, I was so excited in my life. So, I was going to go to the festival again, and I took the ticket. However, because of COVID-19, the festival put off. I was so sad, and I have stood my feeling. I want to go to the festival definitely this year.

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I want to go to a music festival.

I love to listen to music, and I love EDM - which is a kind of music.

Why I love this kind of music, because it makes me high tensionfeel good whenever I am under the weather.

Under the weather often refers to someone who is ill.

I'm obsessed with it, so I bought a DJ set two years ago.

And I went to a music festival where a lot of famous musicians performed, I was sothe most excited I had ever been in my life.

So, I was going to go to the festival again, and I tookgot the ticket.

However, because of COVID-19, the festival put off.was cancelled.

I was so sad, and I have stood my feeling.

I don’t know what the second part means.

I definitely want to go to the festival definitely this year.

I want to go to music festival


I want to go to a music festival.

I love to listen to music, and I love EDM which is a kind of music.


I love to listen to music, and I love EDM - which is a kind of music.

Why I love this kind of music, it makes me high tension whenever I am under the weather.


Why I love this kind of music, because it makes me high tensionfeel good whenever I am under the weather.

Under the weather often refers to someone who is ill.

I'm obsessed with it, so I bought a DJ set two years ago.


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And I went to a music festival where a lot of famous musicians performed, I was so excited in my life.


And I went to a music festival where a lot of famous musicians performed, I was sothe most excited I had ever been in my life.

So, I was going to go to the festival again, and I took the ticket.


So, I was going to go to the festival again, and I tookgot the ticket.

However, because of COVID-19, the festival put off.


However, because of COVID-19, the festival put off.was cancelled.

I was so sad, and I have stood my feeling.


I was so sad, and I have stood my feeling.

I don’t know what the second part means.

I want to go to the festival definitely this year.


I definitely want to go to the festival definitely this year.

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