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shu

March 6, 2022

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The project

Are you in some new project at work ?
What are you responsible for ?


I'm in a new project, our customer is related to vocational education, the marketing department spent three years to get this contract.
This project had finished research stage, as an engineere, it's time to show our technology.

It is inevitable that there are some mistakes . I hope someone make a more wonderful sentence.

Thanks.

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The project

Are you in someworking on a new project at work in your job?

WIs so, what are you responsible for ?

I'm iworking on a new project, o. Our customer is related to vocational education, and the marketing department spenttook three years to get this contract.

Thise research stage of the project had finished research stage, a. As an engineere, it's time to show ourI was now ready to work on the technology.

You could also say "As an engineer, I was now ready to work on the technological aspect of the project"

It is inevitable that there are somemay be a few mistakes .

I hope someone make a more wonderfulcan write a better sentence.

Thanks.

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shu

March 9, 2022

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Thank you very much. Davidcfrank
I will practise more.

The project

Are you in some new project at work ?
What are you responsible for ?

I'm 【working on】 new project. Our customer is related to vocational education, and the marketing department 【took】three years to get this contract.
The research stage of the project had finished. As an engineer, I was now 【ready to】 work on the technology.

It is inevitable that there may be a few mistakes. I hope someone can write a better sentence.

Thanks.

The project

Are you in some new project at work ?

Are you in someworking on a new project at work in your job?

What are you responsible for ?

WIs so, what are you responsible for ?

I'm in a new project, our customer is related to vocational education, the marketing department spent three years to get this contract.

I'm iworking on a new project, o. Our customer is related to vocational education, and the marketing department spenttook three years to get this contract.

This project had finished research stage, as an engineere, it's time to show our technology.

Thise research stage of the project had finished research stage, a. As an engineere, it's time to show ourI was now ready to work on the technology.

It is inevitable that there are some mistakes .

It is inevitable that there are somemay be a few mistakes .

I hope someone make a more wonderful sentence.

I hope someone make a more wonderfulcan write a better sentence.

Thanks.

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