Jan. 17, 2022
Rainy and Cold
It was cloudy in the morning, a little cold. When I went to some offices to apply some documents in the afternoon, it started to rain and become colder. I travelled for several times by bike. However, all my applications were failed, so I felt sad.
Rainy and Cold
It was a little cold and cloudy in the morning, a little cold.
You can put them together!
When I went to some offices to apply some documents in the afternoon, it started to rain and becomeit got colder.
I travelled for several times by bike.
However, all my applications were failrejected, so I felt sad.
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Good job on your writing, there aren't many mistakes, keep going.
Sorry that your applications rejected, please don't give up and keep trying to apply! You will get a good answer soon.
Jan. 18, 2022
Thanks!
Rainy and Cold
It was cloudy in the morning, a little cold.
When I went to some offices to apply some documents in the afternoon, it started to rain and become colder.
When I went to some offices to applyrequest some documents in the afternoon, it started to rain and becomeget colder.
"request" you asked for the documents.
I travelled for several times by bike.
I travelled for several timesa lot by bike.
"I travelled a lot by bike," means that on that day you travelled by bike a lot. It doesn't really refer to other times here.
However, all my applications were failed, so I felt sad.
However, all my applications were failrejected, so I felt sad.
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Best of luck! :)
Jan. 18, 2022
Thank you.
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It was cloudy in the morning, a little cold. It was a little cold and cloudy in the morning You can put them together!
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When I went to some offices to apply some documents in the afternoon, it started to rain and become colder. When I went to some offices to "request" you asked for the documents.
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I travelled for several times by bike. I travelled "I travelled a lot by bike," means that on that day you travelled by bike a lot. It doesn't really refer to other times here.
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However, all my applications were failed, so I felt sad. However, all my applications were However, all my applications were |
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