July 9, 2021
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing games together is a good way to establish closer relationships. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Spending time with other bodies can generate a positive impact on relationships. Take part in plays motivates all team members to do the best. All participants share their thoughts and this reinforces the relationship between each other. From my perspective, I agree with this statement. I think getting a part in acts establishes relationships between each person because it is a perfect condition to meet someone and helps to build up the determination.
First, Interacting with other is something we do daily. Activities help to cultivate relationships between humans. Some bodies are introverted as me, it is challenging to talk with strangers. Doing some acts relate with others. For instance, at highschool I joined the volleyball team. It encourages me to raise my courage and talk with all the squad. Moreover, I understood they are my colleagues even if we lost the game. Consequently, creating wonderful memories develops a strong friendship that continues until now. Therefore, I suggest that being part of an activity benefit a relationship.
Second, playing with people shows their abilities and defects. This makes each member accept the condition they are. Sharing all this moment jointly, boost up the determination in all the crew. For example, I join the volleyball club at my first job. At the beginning, it was complex for me to improve my experiences, so I trained more hour per week. Some friends train me, therefore, I learned more techniques and enhance my certainty. As a result, I entrust in all my partners. Thus, I advise that taking part in some plays start the bravery and maintain the relationship.
In essence, I strongly agree with going part in games serves to boost up relationships. This is because of two reasons: one is an exceptional scene to reinforce any relationship and other is build up the care.
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or "playing to develop . . ."? Not sure what you intended.
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Playing games together is a good way to establish closer relationships.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Spending time with other bodies can generate a positive impact on relationships.
"Bodies" is a bit weird. It objectifies people in a sense. I would just use "people."
Take part in playsPlaying motivates all team members to do their best.
Or "taking part in playing," but that's a bit weird.
All participants share their thoughts, and this reinforces the relationship between each os among therm.
More natural would be "their thoughts, which reinforces" or "their thoughts, reinforcing."
From my perspective, I agree with this statement.
"Agree" indicates that it's your own thoughts/perspective, so you don't need to say it.
I think getting a part in acts establishes relationships between each person because it is a perfect condition to meet someone and helps to build up the determination.
Not sure what you mean by "acts." "Determination" to do what?
First, Iinteracting with other is something we do daily.
Activities help to cultivate relationships between humans.
"Humans" has an associated feeling that refers more broadly to our whole species, so people might be better here.
Some bodiespeople are introverted as me, ilike me. It is challenging to talk with strangers.
Doing some acts relates with others.
Again not too sure what "acts" is referring to.
For instance, atin high school I joined the volleyball team.
It encourages me to raise mygave me the courage andto talk with all the squad.
Moreover, I understood they awere my colleagues even if we lost the game.
Consequently, creating wonderful memories develops a strong friendship that continues until even now.
Therefore, I suggest that being part of an activity benefit a relationship.
"Therefore, I recommend being part of an activity to benefit your relationships."
"Therefore, I suggest that you be a part of an activity to benefit your relationships."
"part of an activity" could be "participate in an activity" to be more natural
Second, playing with people shows their abilities and defects.
"Defects" is a strong word not usually used to describe people. "Weaknesses," "flaws," etc. would be better.
This makes each member accept the condition they are in.
Or "their condition."
Sharing all thisese moments jointly, boosts up the determination in all thof the entire crew.
For example, I joined the volleyball club at my first job.
AtIn the beginning, it was complex for me to improve my experiences, so I trained more hour per week.
You don't really improve "experiences" because those have already passed, so you can't change them. Maybe "skills"?
Some friends trained me, therefore, I learned more techniques and enhance my certainty.
The "therefore" is a bit stiff here. I would do something like "Some friends helped train me, allowing me to improve my technique and gain confidence in myself."
As a result, I entrust in all my partners.
"Entrust" refers to giving someone something because you trust them enough to handle it.
Thus, I advise that taking part in some plays start the bravery andyou bravely take part in some activities to maintain theyour relationships.
Not sure if that was totally what you meant, but that's how I interpreted it.
In essence, I strongly agree with goplaying a part in games serves to boost upthe strength of relationships.
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playing develop stronger relationships playing and developing stronger relationships or "playing to develop . . ."? Not sure what you intended.
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? |
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Playing games together is a good way to establish closer relationships. |
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Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. |
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Spending time with other bodies can generate a positive impact on relationships. Spending time with other bodies can generate a positive impact on relationships. "Bodies" is a bit weird. It objectifies people in a sense. I would just use "people."
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Take part in plays motivates all team members to do the best.
Or "taking part in playing," but that's a bit weird.
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All participants share their thoughts and this reinforces the relationship between each other. All participants share their thoughts, and this reinforces the relationship More natural would be "their thoughts, which reinforces" or "their thoughts, reinforcing."
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From my perspective, I agree with this statement.
"Agree" indicates that it's your own thoughts/perspective, so you don't need to say it.
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I think getting a part in acts establishes relationships between each person because it is a perfect condition to meet someone and helps to build up the determination. I think getting a part in acts establishes relationships between each person because it is a perfect condition to meet someone and helps to build up the determination. Not sure what you mean by "acts." "Determination" to do what?
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First, Interacting with other is something we do daily. First, |
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Activities help to cultivate relationships between humans. Activities help to cultivate relationships between humans. "Humans" has an associated feeling that refers more broadly to our whole species, so people might be better here.
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Some bodies are introverted as me, it is challenging to talk with strangers. Some |
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Doing some acts relate with others. Doing some acts relates with others. Again not too sure what "acts" is referring to.
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For instance, at highschool I joined the volleyball team. For instance, |
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It encourages me to raise my courage and talk with all the squad. It |
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Moreover, I understood they are my colleagues even if we lost the game. Moreover, I understood they |
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Consequently, creating wonderful memories develops a strong friendship that continues until now. Consequently, creating wonderful memories develops a strong friendship that continue |
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Therefore, I suggest that being part of an activity benefit a relationship. Therefore, I suggest that being part of an activity benefit a relationship. "Therefore, I recommend being part of an activity to benefit your relationships."
"Therefore, I suggest that you be a part of an activity to benefit your relationships." "part of an activity" could be "participate in an activity" to be more natural |
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Second, playing with people shows their abilities and defects. Second, playing with people shows their abilities and defects. "Defects" is a strong word not usually used to describe people. "Weaknesses," "flaws," etc. would be better.
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This makes each member accept the condition they are. This makes each member accept the condition they are in. Or "their condition."
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Sharing all this moment jointly, boost up the determination in all the crew. Sharing all th |
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For example, I join the volleyball club at my first job. For example, I joined the volleyball club at my first job. |
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At the beginning, it was complex for me to improve my experiences, so I trained more hour per week.
You don't really improve "experiences" because those have already passed, so you can't change them. Maybe "skills"?
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Some friends train me, therefore, I learned more techniques and enhance my certainty. Some friends trained me, therefore, I learned more techniques and enhance my certainty. The "therefore" is a bit stiff here. I would do something like "Some friends helped train me, allowing me to improve my technique and gain confidence in myself."
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As a result, I entrust in all my partners. As a result, I "Entrust" refers to giving someone something because you trust them enough to handle it.
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Thus, I advise that taking part in some plays start the bravery and maintain the relationship. Thus, I advise that Not sure if that was totally what you meant, but that's how I interpreted it.
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In essence, I strongly agree with going part in games serves to boost up relationships. In essence, I strongly agree with |
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This is because of two reasons: one is an exceptional scene to reinforce any relationship and other is build up the care. |
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