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Man vs. Bee

Rowan Atkinson is an actor that I like me very much. I began to watch him in 'Blackadder. The Cavalier Years', and later with 'Mr. Bean', a very fun series, the two. I laughed a lot with the 'Johnny English' film series, I find that the three are genials. But with 'Man vs. Bee' I have a strangle feel, I liked the series but I was nervous every time that I saw at the clumsy Trevor Bingley (Atkinson) doing some disaster.

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Man vs. Bee

Rowan Atkinson is an actor that I like me very much.

I began to watch him in 'Blackadder.

Then in the Cavalier Years', and later with 'Mr.

Bean', a very fun series, the twoboth were very funny.

I laughed a lot withat (while watching ) the 'Johnny English' film series,. I find that theall three are genials.very good (hilarious).

But with 'Man vs. Bee' I haved a strangle feel,ing. I liked the series but I was nervous every time that I saw at the clumsy Trevor Bingley (played by Atkinson) doing some disaster. (Creating chaos? Making blunders? )

But with 'Man vs. Bee' I have a strangle feel, I liked the series but I was nervous every time that I saw at the clumsy Trevor Bingley (Atkinson) doing some disaster.

I had a strange feeling,

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July 1, 2022

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Thanks.

Rowan Atkinson is an actor that I like me very much.

I began to watch him in 'Blackadder.:

Just fixing a typo here. The title of the series is "Blackadder: The Cavalier Years", with a colon rather than a period.

The Cavalier Years', and later within 'Mr.

Bean', a very fun series, the two. Both of those series were very enjoyable.

I'm not sure whether you meant that the series were fun (enjoyable) or funny (made you laugh).

I laughed a lot with the 'Johnny English' film series, I find that the three are genials.

I'm not sure what word you were looking for with "genial", but that wouldn't fit in English. (Even if it was, you wouldn't make it plural.) Did you perhaps accidentally use the Spanish word "genial", because that would translate as "cool." In that case you could say "I thought that all three series were cool." However, from a stylistic standpoint it's awkward to list two series, say something nice about them, then list another one, and say something that applies to all three. It would flow better to say something like "I began to watch him in 'Blackadder:The Cavalier Years', and later in 'Mr. Bean'. He made me laugh a lot in the 'Johnny English' film series. I thought all three series were really cool and enjoyable."

But with 'Man vs. Bee' I haved a strangle feel,ing. I liked the series, but I wasit made me nervous every time that I saw at the clumsy Trevor Bingley (Atkinson) do's character) clumsily causing some disaster.

I separated your sentence into two for clarity. You only had three actual errors here: "strangle" instead of "strange", "I saw at", and "doing some disaster". In English you can use "at" with "look" and "stare", but not with "see" or "watch". You can "cause a disaster", but not "do a disaster". The other changes are just for stylistic clarity and to make it sound more natural.

Man vs. Bee

Rowan Atkinson is an actor that I like me very much.

Rowan Atkinson is an actor that I like me very much.

Rowan Atkinson is an actor that I like me very much.

I began to watch him in 'Blackadder.

I began to watch him in 'Blackadder.:

The Cavalier Years', and later with 'Mr.

Then in the Cavalier Years', and later with 'Mr.

The Cavalier Years', and later within 'Mr.

Bean', a very fun series, the two.

Bean', a very fun series, the twoboth were very funny.

Bean', a very fun series, the two. Both of those series were very enjoyable.

I laughed a lot with the 'Johnny English' film series, I find that the three are genials.

I laughed a lot withat (while watching ) the 'Johnny English' film series,. I find that theall three are genials.very good (hilarious).

I laughed a lot with the 'Johnny English' film series, I find that the three are genials.

But with 'Man vs. Bee' I have a strangle feel, I liked the series but I was nervous every time that I saw at the clumsy Trevor Bingley (Atkinson) doing some disaster.

But with 'Man vs. Bee' I have a strangle feel, I liked the series but I was nervous every time that I saw at the clumsy Trevor Bingley (Atkinson) doing some disaster.

But with 'Man vs. Bee' I haved a strangle feel,ing. I liked the series but I was nervous every time that I saw at the clumsy Trevor Bingley (played by Atkinson) doing some disaster. (Creating chaos? Making blunders? )

But with 'Man vs. Bee' I haved a strangle feel,ing. I liked the series, but I wasit made me nervous every time that I saw at the clumsy Trevor Bingley (Atkinson) do's character) clumsily causing some disaster.

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