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kiwy

Jan. 13, 2022

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Last Night

Tonight is the last night of this term. The students are going to take their winter vacation tomorrow. Although they will have the last two exams tomorrow, none of them try to review. Most of them are chatting happily, even though two directors show up in the classroom and warn them to be quiet. Hence, I hate to teach them. Teaching them lessons as talking with air, which really sucks. Tomorrow will be the last day of my teaching them, I'm so delighted.

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Although they will have the last two exams tomorrow, none of them try toare reviewsing.

Most of them are chatting to each other happily, even though two directors have shown up in the classroom and warnhave told them to be quiet.

Hence,This is why I hate to teaching them.

'Hence' is quite old fashioned.

Teaching them lessons asis like talking with airto a brick wall, which really sucks.

Trying to teach them is like talking to a brick wall, which really sucks.

Tomorrow will be the last day of my teaching themclasses, I'm so delighted.

Tomorrow will be the last day that I have to teach them, I'm so delighted.

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Well done :)

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kiwy

Jan. 14, 2022

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Thank you.

Last Night

Tonight is the last night of this term.

The students are going to take their winter vacation tomorrow.

Although they will have the last two exams tomorrow, none of them try to review.

Although they will have the last two exams tomorrow, none of them try toare reviewsing.

Most of them are chatting happily, even though two directors show up in the classroom and warn them to be quiet.

Most of them are chatting to each other happily, even though two directors have shown up in the classroom and warnhave told them to be quiet.

Hence, I hate to teach them.

Hence,This is why I hate to teaching them.

Teaching them lessons as talking with air, which really sucks.

Teaching them lessons asis like talking with airto a brick wall, which really sucks.

Tomorrow will be the last day of my teaching them, I'm so delighted.

Tomorrow will be the last day of my teaching themclasses, I'm so delighted.

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